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  • #2
    jmck87
    Closed Accounts Posts: 196 ✭✭jmck87


    crap.


  • #3
    MetalMaiden
    Closed Accounts Posts: 16 ✭MetalMaiden


    Thanks. Real constructive.


  • #4
    Steve_o
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 3,432 ✭✭✭Steve_o


    jmck87 wrote:
    crap.

    How is this helpful....if your gonna post a comment, why not make it useful, especially since MetalMaiden is asking for feedback...noob

    ps. MetalMaiden i can't access it in work, i'll check it later and tell ya what i think.


  • #5
    Dublinstiofán
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 2,190 ✭✭✭Dublinstiofán


    Can't access it in work either, any chance you can post the lyrics here?


  • #6
    machiavellianme
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 13,225 ✭✭✭✭machiavellianme


    Very poor tbh. Sorry, but you asked.
    Sounds like an evanescence ballad. Too much letting the guitars ring for effect (a la early cure stuff but not nearly as interesting) and the lyrics arent really up to much.


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  • #7
    nyarlothothep
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 5,182 ✭✭✭nyarlothothep


    Its got some potential, some nice chord changes and a dark atmosphere, but it doesnt seem to go anywhere, maybe put in some extra instrumentation/melody lines to build it up. Also the timing is a bit loose and it gets repetitive. Keep at it though since its different.


  • #8
    tbh
    Closed Accounts Posts: 15,914 ✭✭✭✭tbh


    nothing a good producer couldn't sort out really - it's a bit indulgent. You've a nice voice tho.


  • #9
    frobisher
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 2,413 ✭✭✭frobisher


    JMCK87: One week ban. PM sent.

    MetalMaiden: I can honestly say that I think you've got a lot of potential. Especially as your page says you're only starting out. Keep on doing what you're doing and you'll definitely make some quality stuff.


  • #10
    eoin5
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 2,141 ✭✭✭eoin5


    jmck87 wrote:
    crap.

    Thats gaud awful jmck87 :eek:

    Anyways I think you have a very good voice but the instrumentation isnt anything to write home about. A bit of a change with the style of guitar and bass every so often helps a lot. If you havent already listen to how Alice in Chains make their songs flow, I think you could learn a lot from the likes of Heaven Beside You if you studied it a bit.

    I know its not what your asking about but a bit of noise reduction for the vocals and a bit of general tidying for the guitars wouldnt go amiss.


  • #11
    MetalMaiden
    Closed Accounts Posts: 16 ✭MetalMaiden


    Thanks for all the feedback! Yeah I know the guitar work's not amazing. I'm actually a pianist and sort of had to take up the guitar to record this song... long story. Hopefully I'm getting better! And to the person who said it was a bad thing that it sounded like an Evanescence ballad, I actually take that as a compliment cos I love that style.


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