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my poem

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  • 28-07-2007 1:18pm
    #1
    pinchmycheeks
    Banned (with Prison Access) Posts: 18 ✭


    i sit
    i wait
    i smile
    i look
    but
    no one
    can hear
    my cry
    or see my tear
    please help
    lonely
    cold
    ahhhhh
    what is that it is the heat
    your arms
    pull me in
    safe


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    #2
    pinchmycheeks
    Banned (with Prison Access) Posts: 18 ✭pinchmycheeks


    critique me please


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    #3
    yeabutnobutyea
    Closed Accounts Posts: 2 ✭yeabutnobutyea


    i sense great pain in your words...a sense of loneliness and a yerning to belong.
    its a wonderful poem with a beautiful insight to your soul,keep em coming!!!;)


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