Blossoming {Profane and Adult Nonsense}

Crazy Christ · 11-06-2007 6:26pm #1

Surely it was a blossoming of our two hearts
I forced you to the ground and made you smell my farts.
My persistence and persuasion and general cordiality
Added (retrospectively) to my rapes a certain legality.
Endless fantasies of slitting your throat
With that penknife I found in your second-hand coat.
Nobody else will despise you as much as I
I want to masturbate everytime I see you cry.
You shat into a plastic bag; I fu**ed it over a wall
It landed like the golden leaf drifting in the Fall.
Two hearts combining with passing of years,
Seventeen black babies drowning in your tears.
Under the stars; a homeless man pisses into a cup;
Nightclubs catch on fire; the smoke and screams spiral endlessly up.
You said you didn’t believe in fate
This knife is going up your c**t if you’re one more day late.

dublinario · 11-06-2007 9:13pm

Crazy Christ, you seem to be holding back. Why not let go properly? It feels as though you are censoring yourself. Don't be afraid to write without restraint.

Crazy Christ · 11-06-2007 9:42pm

I had a friend who boasted that he won a poetry competition from an American website.
They said his poem would be published in a special book he just had to pay 50 dollars to buy it.
I entered that little ditty and lo and behold, it was going to be published..
Proof that these websites are a scam. You can submit any old rubbish