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yesterday

  • 11-05-2007 2:21pm
    #1
    Jacinta
    Closed Accounts Posts: 35 ✭


    Yesterday

    Left my heart on your table
    Love at your door
    Tears on your footsteps
    Don’t have you no more

    Night came too quickly
    But my sun faded slow
    I needed you yes
    You wanted me no.

    Gave you back everything
    What I took away
    Hoped you’d return it
    Sometime then
    Yesterday.

    Now the truth is apparent
    As I blank out the past
    Walk forward in hope
    And pray it won’t last.


Comments

  • #2
    shiv
    Closed Accounts Posts: 408 ✭✭shiv


    Some good images here Jacinta. :)

    I think some of it suffers from struggling to rhyme, though.
    Do you feel comfortable writing without rhyming?


  • #3
    Darren DT289/1
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 4 ✭Darren DT289/1


    This is very good one Jacinta. Is this about something you experienced yourself. If it is it's a good way of taking about it.

    Thanks.

    Darren McMahon
    darren.mcmahon@hotmail.com


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