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Story of A Girl

  • 19-02-2007 11:20pm
    #1
    lilmissprincess
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 3,016 ✭✭✭


    Inside this wolves lair,
    The dark hair of her beauty sleeps
    Melody of a thousand songs echoing
    Drowning out his growl.

    TickTock
    TickTock
    Time is running
    Out far too fast

    He holds the corpse
    Of a thousand memories
    In his arms
    As she lies sleeping

    TickTock
    TickTock
    Time is running
    Out far too fast

    The red is hard to hide
    But on her pale skin her beauty wins
    It always does
    He hasn't won yet.

    TickTock
    TickTock
    Time is running
    Out far too fast

    Dawn awakens
    Sun hits her face
    His love transcends upon her
    Too little too late

    TickTock
    TickTock
    Time is running
    Out far too fast

    The bag is packed
    her souls aflee
    From the wolves lair
    That hid her beauty.

    TickTock
    She's Free.


Comments

  • #2
    Night_Rocker
    Closed Accounts Posts: 69 ✭✭Night_Rocker


    all your works just seem to have this complete lack of any emotion or connection. you do just seem to shell them out just because.


  • #3
    shiv
    Closed Accounts Posts: 408 ✭✭shiv


    I like the line 'he holds a corpse of a thousand memories.'
    Very striking.

    And the last two lines are nice rhythmically.


  • #4
    lilmissprincess
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 3,016 ✭✭✭lilmissprincess


    Thanks. Night Rocker, ok, I'll put up some of my more emotional ones. They're from a few months ago and are fairly teen-angst-i-hate-this-person, but hey, you're asking for emotion.


  • #5
    Night_Rocker
    Closed Accounts Posts: 69 ✭✭Night_Rocker


    that's all i'm askin for


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