Skate Jump C&C

melekalikimaka

first time trying this stuff, i've seen a few of this type before, kinda comic strip stle, just looking for tips on how to improve on it next time





and one more for a bit of verbal bashing

kjt

The sequence is good but I'd have to say it's quite dark.
Colours don't seem to be very sharp. I did a little tweak
I hope you don't mind. The second one's the same, the
colours just don't seem sharp. Great catch though

paudie

I reckon in the first one you need to be pulled out a bit more for the entire sequence, at the moment you don't really get to see how big the jump was and the last two frames are too tight in I reckon.

Not too gone on the skate shot as it's an ass shot, I know it was unlucky that the skater was facing the other way, but it takes away a lot when you can't see the riders face, nice peak action capture though, fair play.

RazielDoomgate

i love taking these shots.. and the best thing is ya just need a mate that can skate ..hehe.. took these a while back when i first got the camera.. jsut a bit of skate boarding a some early pk