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Somewhere, Something Went Wrong

  • 18-02-2007 8:59pm
    #1
    Peyton Manning
    Closed Accounts Posts: 16,658 ✭✭✭✭


    These years are full of nothing,
    Nothing but rocks and hard places,
    Too many faceless names, intertwined with nameless faces.

    I've burned too many bridges,
    Quickly, for them I had no further use,
    Now I tread upon the rubble, around my neck there hangs a noose.

    I would have left so long ago,
    But those who hold me back persist,
    I grasped such hopeful aspirations, now crumble in my fist.

    For night surrounds my sullen air,
    It seeps within my soul and heart,
    And all would be enlightened, yet passing time tears me apart.

    A distant hope remains somehow,
    Too rarely do I seem to realise,
    That I can breathe yet once again, once the sun shall rise.


Comments

  • #2
    shiv
    Closed Accounts Posts: 408 ✭✭shiv


    Your writing is stronger when you don't try and force rhymes. I enjoyed your other post much more for it's rhythm and powerful imagery...


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