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Number Three

  • 19-01-2007 1:12am
    #1
    Rawr!
    Closed Accounts Posts: 227 ✭✭


    Darkness.
    It seeps through my cold body like bleak Nothingness.
    Nothing!
    That is me.
    I am it.
    The two of us are entwined as one.
    I am nothing.
    And nothing is me.

    The tears fall from my woeful eyes.
    Tears that fall heavily.
    I plead with them to wash me away.
    I need to disappear.
    They push me away like so many before them have done.

    I feel empty and let down.
    In silence, my loneliness screams at me.

    Leave me alone!
    I cry! Again!
    The pain is trapped inside.
    I cannot let it out.

    Others will not understand.
    Only my pen understands me.


Comments

  • #2
    Sweetleilani
    Closed Accounts Posts: 16 ✭Sweetleilani


    You have been writing for long?

    It is a nice outlet to express yourself one day i will post some of mine on here :D it is from couple years back though

    Anyways, good luck with it


    Shannon


  • #3
    Rawr!
    Closed Accounts Posts: 227 ✭✭Rawr!


    I've been writins for a couple of years now. Well, I'd say for a year, but I did write a poem about 3 years back.... But I don't like to share that one....

    Thanks... and yeah, this is a good outlet here. I like posting stuff here.. It's good for getting feedback.


  • #4
    Dylan_James
    Closed Accounts Posts: 157 ✭✭Dylan_James


    "Darkness.
    It seeps through my cold body like bleak Nothingness.
    Nothing!
    That is me.
    I am it.
    The two of us are entwined as one.
    I am nothing.
    And nothing is me."

    Hey Rawr are you the love child of Emily Dickinson and Trent Reznor? Time differences would say no but time travel maybe? Still, black and cold opening. Good. I like the idea of you and Nothingness being lovers.

    "The tears fall from my woeful eyes.
    Tears that fall heavily.
    I plead with them to wash me away.
    I need to disappear.
    They push me away like so many before them have done."

    I dont understand the relevence of the last line there. Maybe that needs some more work.


  • #5
    Rawr!
    Closed Accounts Posts: 227 ✭✭Rawr!


    Dylan_James wrote:
    I dont understand the relevence of the last line there. Maybe that needs some more work.


    It was a personal reference.... saying that even my tears don't want to know... they push me away..... like people do.... twas a personal reference about how everyone leaves and whatnot.... Anyways....

    Thats all.


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