Crazy (A Poem)

There have been a few poems posted lately -- excellent.

Just wondering if ye could read over this one I wrote and let me know what y'all thought!

Why cant I understand what is going through my own head
All my worries
All my insecurities
Are coming back to me.
Once I thought they were gone
Once I was happy.
But I realise that this it to be no more
And I shall be alone
In my own little world
In my own little torment.
My face contorts, my eyes fixate, I cannot understand.
Help me, oh lord, help me.
For I am helpless. I am gormless. I am lost.
I am lost in the shadows of my mind.
Of the places where man shouldn’t tread.
I seek to find a way out
So I can finally see the light of day
And the demise of man
And the end of me.
My legs are broken, my feet are cement
I cant run away. I’m stuck.
Somebody free me, my child, somebody free me now.
For here I am, stuck in my thoughts,
Thoughts of things people dread.
Help. Me.

O-in

I like the poem but I must ask, are you alright man? Just want to check. Its seems to invoke an image of you alone speaking (or thinking) the words. I can relate, I have written some stuff along these lines. Like:

Sod Dumb Me

An accepted unrequited longing
Stolen glances at what lust needs
Sullied eyes cleansed by tears
Depressed joy felt deep inside

Escape from Agoraphobia
Or drown in amniotic fluid
Feast on raw flesh until Roaster crows
Moment of empathy

He is my friend and greatest foe
I want to get acquainted and never see him again
Rape myself in a blanket of sorrow

After all I am a man

I am absolutely great, thanks for asking.

Though it was written at a time when I was feeling quite down.

Black Swan

Ever thought of doing it to rap music?