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  • 23-10-2006 7:07pm
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    Call Me Jimmy
    Registered Users Posts: 8,449 ✭✭✭


    Ok guys, looking for some feedback on this little piece. I was trying to get to sleep the other night and this just sorta came to me...

    Where is Nowhere?

    Is nowhere here?
    or is it there?

    Do not say,
    it is everywhere.

    Blooming flowers bloom,
    Niagara Falls.

    Nowhere near,
    nowhere there.

    You do not own the copyright,
    to my heart.


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    #2
    Call Me Jimmy
    Registered Users Posts: 8,449 ✭✭✭Call Me Jimmy


    anyone? I take it as a bad sign nobody has been compelled to leave feedback.


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    dr.bollocko
    Moderators, Music Moderators Posts: 35,943 Mod ✭✭✭✭dr.bollocko


    Well... its only 4 lines really, because the last line could be a signature, I dunno. It just comes out of nowhere. Baddum kisch.
    And it doesnt scan too well...
    Its a poetry style that could work if the subject matter made more sense or was more earthy.
    Nowhere, now here....
    Its been done.
    And whats with the last line?


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    #4
    Call Me Jimmy
    Registered Users Posts: 8,449 ✭✭✭Call Me Jimmy


    Thanks for the comment, appreciate it dude.

    Well as I said this sorta just flowed out of me but the last line is sorta like saying **** you to all my ex girlfriends ye know? Most of them were clingy and after the break-ups many of them sorta still hung around and kept annoying me.

    Ye digg?


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