Feedback wanted on a song I'm hoping to sell

frobisher

Here's a song I'm hoping to have covered by someone. I'm about to start approaching publishing companies and artist managers. I think it could be a bit of a minor hit..... but then I would!, Any feedback is appreciated. It's the song on this link called Perfect Day.

sturgo

Very O.C. / Dawsons Creek montage like. Personally that kinda stuff makes me want to hurl, but to be fair, it's well thought out & straight to the point. I don't see any reason why the right kind of band wouldn't pick it up.

A bit of advice if I may... write another 9 songs just like that one. I garuntee you one of them will go somewhere.

Best of luck.

Redegg

again, well put together, not what I listen to but I could see it getting alot of airplay around the country. good luck!

*Tripper*

Yea well put together song not my cup of tea but as Stugro said write another 8 or 9 and one is bound to go somewhere

banquo

I liked it enough to put on my mp3 player.

so there ya go.