On The Railroad

Ruu_Old

More experimenting from me, comments/suggestions or anything really. Let me know whats on your mind.

Linkage

edit: removed tower, telephone poles on right.

rymus

first thing I spotted were those two awful poles with white boxes on em. I'd lose them straight away.

Ruu_Old

Pff, how did I miss those! Consider it done.

rymus

Marvellous, how about nuking that huge ass tower in the background also?

Karoma

Nice.

If you're going that route, may as well get rid of the telephone pole,etc. on the right hand side.

rymus

damn you, thats the next thing I was going to say!

Ruu_Old

Done and done, thanks chums.

5uspect

Sure why don't you clone out that person blocking our view of the tracks.:D (A job for vanishing point maybe :rolleyes: )

EDIT: Nice shot tho, the noise really gives it that authentic feel.

Ruu_Old

Thanks, I took a couple more earlier, I must get cracking on them and see how they turned out.

elven

Can I be a bit annoying, and say that there's too much sky? If I view the picture full size and scroll down so that it cuts off half of the sky, it focuses my attention on the railway sleepers and converging lines much more.

I like that you've kept it in focus right back, so there's a nice crisp horizon with the bushes there. It works for me

eas

very nice shot Ruu, like the angle, like the focus. I agree with elven, maybe lobbing off an inch or so off the top would give it more drama.

Ruu_Old

elven wrote:

Can I be a bit annoying, and say that there's too much sky? If I view the picture full size and scroll down so that it cuts off half of the sky, it focuses my attention on the railway sleepers and converging lines much more.

I like that you've kept it in focus right back, so there's a nice crisp horizon with the bushes there. It works for me

Indeed you can be annoying. Thanks will fix that.

edit: new link where i took off some of the sky here.