Utopia: Lost And Found?

Black Swan

What a strange place
We find ourselves in
On Sunday morn
A quest after sin?

I sought utopia lost
After too much beer
Only to find boards' dead
Without peer cheer.

A night hung over
Brain cells die away
Never to be replaced
I'm sad to say.

I babble now words
From what's left mind
Into cyber space
To find my kind.

Past noon is upon
The clock ticking there
Must of fallen asleep
But who's to care?

Pull open the frig
Look into the gloom
Half-eaten meals
I now will consume.

But alas I find
A glass bottle there
Its cap's intact
A sight to bare!

I pop the lid
Aroma abounds
Of stale barley;
Your face a frown?

Of nutrition you say
While I savor foam?
But it's from hops
And ancient Rome!

My spelling flounders
Has gone bye-bye
What matter dear
With brains to fry?

Utopia was lost
And now is found
As I twirl about
Falling to ground.

shiv

Blue_Lagoon wrote:

What a strange place
We find ourselves in
On Sunday morn
A quest after sin?

I sought utopia lost
After too much beer
Only to find boards' dead
Without peer cheer.

A night hung over
Brain cells die away
Never to be replaced
I'm sad to say.

I babble now words
From what's left mind
Into cyber space
To find my kind.

Past noon is upon
The clock ticking there
Must of fallen asleep
But who's to care?

Pull open the frig
Look into the gloom
Half-eaten meals
I now will consume.

But alas I find
A glass bottle there
Its cap's intact
A sight to bare!

I pop the lid
Aroma abounds
Of stale barley;
Your face a frown?

Of nutrition you say
While I savor foam?
But it's from hops
And ancient Rome!

My spelling flounders
Has gone bye-bye
What matter dear
With brains to fry?

Utopia was lost
And now is found
As I twirl about
Falling to ground.

Interesting rhythm.
I love 'peer cheer'!

Black Swan

Thanks. I really have no idea what I am doing when it comes to poetry. Just thought it would be fun.