Open Call Out

Peyton Manning

After seeing some of the disgraceful attempts at rhymes in this board, I figured I give all of you a lesson in battling. Veteran textcee here from other hip-hop forums, so step up only if you got skills.

No Bar Limit,
First to 5 votes, 3-0 = TKO
Verses juged on Wordplay, Personals, Punches, Multis and Flow
Any other rules, state before you spit.

Hoodlum

i'll teach ya a thing or two, you forgot metas and structure

Hoodlum

aight i is spittin' first

*i'm on top of things ya hear me? i is showin' no respect,
with a name like archimedes you should expect to get your chin checked,

hoodlum that's my name, i is takin' a shot at ya,
wat i'm gonna do is aim it, cock it back and "blah!"

yo brains be spillin', i be chillin' already back at the home,
clean conscience, fear is nonsense when you bad to tha bone,

you thinks you is a mean nigga, i say this without a doubt,
comin' in here actin' all hard, you a ****in' girl scout,

get in my path once and i'll brush you to the side,
keep ****in' wit me tho i commit a homicide,

you really thinks you hard right? compared to you i am a beast,
i've seen your type before, i'll rip you apart piece by piece,

i spit the illest **** eva dog, between you and me there is no comparison,
**** if you even spit back, it's gonna be embarrassing,


you thought you was gonna win when you called out for this spot,
well i've got a message for you son, no one out there thinks you hot*

aight for those of you who don't know how this works we waitin' for his ass to try beat me then you start votin' aight

Peyton Manning

Ill saw your head in halve to~split your~wit until you~submit /
Lyrics that 'can't be fed off' like b!tches with small tits/

Take your lungs and chop so it burns when you in-hell/ (inhale)
Leave you broke so u couldnt cop if u was throwin~hoodlums~in~jail/

When killing~pr!cks~im~relentless cos like the Knicks~you~defenseless/ (NY Knicks)
Face defeat in an instance, rob you so you can get beat cents-less/

Hoodlum, all of your lines are played more than naive~b!tches/
Bi-sexual cos your sexuality is like a light - it~switches/

Hoodlum gets dug out more than fields for world~war~trenches/
This f@ggot rides more d!cks than non ballers ride~benches/

When it comes to dissing, Arch will beat Hoodlum~into~submission/
Finish you with~precision cos like a retarded elf wrap skills is what you~missing/ (rap skills)

Youre bland with~rhymes, like rows of handicaps i can't stand your-lines***/
I feel the breeze - keep blowing on me so you must be a fan~of~mine/

Arch~is~savage, my~flow~does~ravage, increasin the blow~of~the~damage/
The only reason that Hoodlum post first is so he can say that Im~below~average!!**

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**If he posts first, I post second (under him). If im under him, im below average cos he's only average. Self explanatory.


Aight uppin for votes.

Sm0ke

hoodlums verse consisted of filler and below average punches. u never real took the battle to him in any way

arc- nice wordplay flowed well good punches. ill give u a real battle when ur finished playing with kids. what sites have u battled on by the way?!?

Vote= Arc

Makaveli

Well Hoodlum went back and added 4 more bars and probably shouldn't have.
Hoodlum you got knocked da fúck out. Killed.

Ay Cee

Archimedes wrote:

Veteran textcee here

That's something you're proud of?!

Tha Gopher

Archimedes wrote:

Veteran textcee here from other hip-hop forums, so step up only if you got skills.

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Are there ever guns pulled at what sounds like these very highly charged online gigs?


I actually like your lyrics, but its more stunning hearing it in an earpiece than reading it off a computer screen.

Hoodlum

Makaveli wrote:

Well Hoodlum went back and added 4 more bars and probably shouldn't have.
Hoodlum you got knocked da fúck out. Killed.

ya i'm n05h3ad so what, everyone knows it, i'm only back on temporarily till the other site i'm on is finished gettin' updated. Peace out:D

Hoodlum

i know i got my ass beat on this one but can i ask are my skills any good for someone who only been wrtitin' rhymes for less than a week

Beefeater

no, your rhyming skills are not good, and dont start whinging cause i'm only telling u the truth. Secondly, i doubt you cap bullrts in peoples asses in wexford. thirdly whats with "i is" and that? .....ARE PEOPLE REALLY SO SCARED TO BE THEMSELVES???

Makaveli

Hoodlum wrote:

ya i'm n05h3ad so what, everyone knows it, i'm only back on temporarily till the other site i'm on is finished gettin' updated. Peace out:D

You have been site banned twice for a reason. Get a clue.