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homah_7ft · 2006-06-11 13:38:53

I have gathered those images which called me, made my soul think of your call, made my soul think of that fall, that fall to soft sea breeze stony shore, where I left that reflection mirror in me, I wanted you to see, delayed maybe but follow my wonder to where the gull dives, how she struggles into air yet its forgotten…

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11-06-2006 2:38pm

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homah_7ft

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I have gathered those images which called me,
made my soul think of your call,
made my soul think of that fall,
that fall to soft sea breeze stony shore,
where I left that reflection mirror in me,
I wanted you to see,
delayed maybe but follow my wonder to where the gull dives,
how she struggles into air yet its forgotten to see the sparkles beneath,
one sparkle closed upon with folded wings,
white from blue and to blue returns the folded water,
let your eyes look at this and find,
find how you are not hidden to me.

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#2 20-06-2006 2:26am
Matt Holck

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"the folded wing to folded water" shows a harrnony/union between the protagonist and the environment

Good choice of words

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