Sharp

Shrimp

Thanks for viewing, what you think?

Model: Me

melekalikimaka

i like it, very much an advenet typr dealio, could see it on a poster or leaflet.\

(tho the suit is a bit al capone)

edit 'advenet typr dealio' means to say advert type deal

zippo22

"... an advenet typr dealio, ...... "

What it God's name do you mean ?.

Valentia

You divil. You never answered my question

Ruu_Old

It does look like an advert some from corporate world magazine alright but me likes it alot.


*gets my briefcase*

Zillah

The suit is perfect, the tie is hideous, and I think'd look better if you were putting the final touch on the tie rather than so lightly touching it.

Flipflip

Very good shot, well thought out concept.

Good stuff!

LikeOhMyGawd!

Totally clichéd subject matter, decent execution but let down by the cheap two-tone watch.

Alun

Sharp? Smarmy, more like

Oriel

The watch is crap and makes you hand look fat. The top of the image is too dark - I know this was done to cast focus on the tie, but I think you've overdone it.

ChityWest

I am guessing that it is supposed to look like one of those corporate inspirational posters ? If thats what its meant to look like it does the job.

Shrimp

Just looking at it now on a desktop, after editing it on my laptop.. yeah it's a bit darker than I would have liked.

As for the watch, it was by no means cheap, and I don't see how it looks that way in this shot, anyway thats neither here nor there.

Thanks for all the feedback...