Ramblings (Of An Insecure Boyfriend)

Night_Rocker

And could you kiss them better
The scars on my body and my soul?
I’ve been hurt before
And it’s always by a sheep in wolf’s clothing.
And if lying is the most fun a girl can have without taking her clothes off
Then I’ll keep you undressed
And prone and exposed
As I have left myself for you.
I could be your best bet
Let alone your worst ex and
Will make you hurt.
I’ve been training over the years of how to hit back
Twice as hard.
Stutter
If I stutter would you laugh or help me along?
And will you stop me if I begin to ramble?
And if I use the word love
Would you digress?
And if I kept you in a flower vase
Could you dig me out of my tunnels?
I’m kind of new to this
Although me and my friend pain here
Have already met.
Would you find me perverted if
I wished to stay in and make love all day?
And would you be “creeped out” if I stared at you to pass the time?
Do you find my clothes lame?
Do questions make you wretch?
You are the only person who could level me with a stare.
I’ll get lost in your curves
While you get lost in a book.
And as you stand at a party with Sara
You laugh
And the room ignites, turning my stomach over and over.
Until the walls crumble around us and the people melt away
And the seas dry up and the trees turn to dust
Till all that’s left
Is us.
Shall I go on?

shiv

I like it. A lot.
Think it needs a bit more structure, to break it up.
I like the questions, the comparisons.
Good work.

tombanana

very good.. it's very realistic and touching..

well done

lilmissprincess

Wow. Way insecure....so real to life. Congrats.