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Re-Match

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  • 19-04-2006 3:42pm
    #1
    The Craft
    Closed Accounts Posts: 1 ✭


    Re-Match


    Flickering eyelids dream loosely hanging white teeth,
    Too young to have these visions,
    Crystelline remembrance of what was meant to happen,
    A staple of laboured thoughts, frozen to form indented bordering cracks,

    Holding responsible, a friend I'll see regardless,
    Holding witness, a complete foreign audience,
    This penetrating niggling defect,
    Refusing to accept a society of oneself,

    Passing ambition, at different rates for silent observers,
    Playing broadly with an enemy I know dear,
    Widespread arms to welcome, chin to the sky,
    The domain of the speculative brought a timely intervention,

    Ever, overcoming all,
    I'm holding grudges with tomorrow


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    #2
    shiv
    Closed Accounts Posts: 408 ✭✭shiv


    There's elements I like in this, but overall it leaves me a bit baffled.
    Some of it feels a bit forced to be honest.
    I love the title and the ending.


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