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Nothing to Say

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  • 20-02-2006 8:52pm
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    Closed Accounts Posts: 69 ✭✭


    She’s coming over
    But we’ve got nothing to say.
    We’ll watch a movie or two
    Kiss and then she’ll leave.
    It’s always turns out this way.
    I want to tell you things.
    I want to tell you you’re beautiful
    That I’m happy around you
    That I wrote you a poem
    That you make the pain
    In my stomach go away
    That I’m writing you a song
    That I’m writing you a story
    That I forgot life was good
    Before I met you
    That you make me laugh
    That I want to hold you
    Every second of the day
    That I’m scared for you
    When you leave
    That I’m afraid of what you do
    When you’re around other guys
    That I think you don’t think of me
    When I’m not around
    That I think you think
    I’m just an easy ****
    That secretly I
    Think you hate me
    That I think you’ll leave me eventually
    That I think you’ll die before me
    That I think you should go
    You’re better off without me anyway.
    She’s coming over
    But we’ve got nothing to say.


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  • Registered Users Posts: 3,016 ✭✭✭lilmissprincess


    Oh...I was like, the start is amazing. And then the end is just a spiral of self-doubt that never stops..depressing.I like it though. And I can't really judge depressing poetry.


  • Closed Accounts Posts: 833 ✭✭✭pisslips


    Yeah well liked
    It seems evry word had true fellings behind it
    appreciated:)


  • Closed Accounts Posts: 51 ✭✭lu22


    .
    I want to tell you things.
    I want to tell you you’re beautiful
    That I’m happy around you
    That I wrote you a poem
    That you make the pain
    In my stomach go away
    That I’m writing you a song
    That I’m writing you a story
    That I forgot life was good
    Before I met you
    That you make me laugh
    That I want to hold you
    Every second of the day



    I felt like crying when i was reading this, emotion is raw here i reckon, great stuff.. ive quoted my favourite piece, the rest of it is great too, its just this bit that got me because i've felt it all before ! great stuff, thanks :)


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