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hi all.. i'm new

  • 16-02-2006 6:50pm
    #1
    stol3n_lif3
    Closed Accounts Posts: 19 ✭


    hi i'm a big noob to the forum scene.. sort of.. well anyway..

    i've a question..

    i write some poetry and short stories.. and was curious..

    could anyone give me some serious constructive criticism on them...

    any feedback would be great..


Comments

  • #2
    AndyPipkin2007
    Closed Accounts Posts: 53 ✭✭AndyPipkin2007


    Hey

    Wha's Up


  • #3
    Sarky
    Closed Accounts Posts: 31,967 ✭✭✭✭Sarky


    That's what the forum is for, stol3n_lif3. Post away.


  • #4
    stol3n_lif3
    Closed Accounts Posts: 19 ✭stol3n_lif3


    thankx.. so do i jus post it up or do i send it to a certain section or how does it work..

    sori i 'm a big noob


  • #5
    Sarky
    Closed Accounts Posts: 31,967 ✭✭✭✭Sarky


    No sections. Post it up in the forum, and if anyone feels like giving their opinion, they will.


  • #6
    stol3n_lif3
    Closed Accounts Posts: 19 ✭stol3n_lif3


    thank you.. awh i'm all smiles now...

    this is my first posted poem.. please let me know peeps...



    A Notice

    Did you notice that I noticed?
    The notice there upon the wall
    I noticed, that you noticed
    That the notice is very small
    Beneath the notice is another notice
    Imprinted upon the wall
    It reads:
    “I noticed, that you’ve noticed that you’re looking at the wall”

    To fully understand this notice
    You have to notice that its there
    But I noticed from you’re motions
    That you didn’t really care

    So in turn…

    I have removed the notice
    You may have noticed
    The one that was sitting upon the wall
    I noticed, did you notice
    It has left a shape upon the wall
    A noticeable mark, from where a notice once was,
    A parking space for the next noticeable notice

    To be noticed upon the wall...


    oh.. well...


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