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How to Castigate a Badger

Laplandman · 2006-01-19 17:03:58

How to Castigate a Badger Why did you walk into the trap? You are a stupid animal and my words Give vent to your folly In the bored moonlight.

19-01-2006 5:03pm

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Laplandman

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How to Castigate a Badger

Why did you walk into the trap?
You are a stupid animal and my words
Give vent to your folly
In the bored moonlight.

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#2 26-03-2006 9:08am

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Try harder tbh.

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#3 26-03-2006 1:01pm

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I quite like it. It says everything it has to without being superfluous. The only thing that I'm unsure about is the line breaks - they seem a little jagged or something.

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#4 05-04-2006 10:43pm

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Thanks. I wasn't going for an economy of any sort. Its mere vacuousness. But I suppose its hard not to approach with a degree of lyricism. Its a bit of a mood poem tbh. I appreciate Scouser's reaction, although his sentiment is rather useless, unfulfilling and pointless.

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