would you guys check out my pics

Ideo

hey, i would love some commentary on these pics. i like photography but rarely shoot so i only have a few portfolio worthy(in my opinion) photos so i'd love you opinions/critcisms/comments please.

www.pdalton.photosite.com

anything to help me shoot better photos but no stringint critcisms please:rolleyes:

thanks

paul

ps click on slideshow in the top centre of the page and it'l go through the pics

DotOrg

post the url properly to start with

http://www.pdalton.photosite.com/Album1/

em.. not a whole lot of positives from me. most of them are lacking any kind of focal point. photos need something to draw the eye in and bring them around the photo. some nice enough skys in there but the exposures off, either too dark, not enough contrast

captain P

the one in Trinity of the guy laying down the euro coins I like. although I would've taken the shot from even lower to see what that looks like. On the others though I agree with DotOrg. The customs house is crooked and blurry. Even leaning on the wall would help that.

Ideo

what do you mean by the contrast? i only took the photos with a kodak 3 optical zoom point and shoot so im not expecting masterpieces of shots. what would you change in the orange skyline shot, its very dark at the bottom like? any help is great