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  • 03-01-2006 4:00pm
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    lu22
    Closed Accounts Posts: 51 ✭✭


    Dis honest hands, tried to save my soul
    as I undeniably stroll in to the unknown,

    un opened doors, leading to floors
    where emotions are sign posted
    leading to less

    in time we all fall, and ropes cannot hold us
    miss a step, take a mile
    lose a tear, gain a smile

    look at the rhyming
    its all gone wrong
    who said life was a perfect song

    in the end its all the same
    mixtures of pleasure
    coupled with pain


    .............. kill me with your comments im hitting a wall here !


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    #2
    Custom22
    Closed Accounts Posts: 207 ✭✭Custom22


    Unsure is one word, not two.


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    lilmissprincess
    Registered Users Posts: 3,016 ✭✭✭lilmissprincess


    Sorry, but I don't get it.


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    gracehopper
    Registered Users Posts: 1,144 ✭✭✭gracehopper


    lu22 wrote:
    in time we all fall, and ropes cannot hold us
    miss a step, take a mile
    lose a tear, gain a smile

    I like this, its sort like an irvine welsh narration, nice one!


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    #5
    rhurja
    Closed Accounts Posts: 14 ✭rhurja


    Did you post this a while back?

    I think you should let this one go.. In the immortal words of William Faulkner, "Kill your darlings".


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