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un sure

lu22 · 2006-01-03 15:00:52

Dis honest hands, tried to save my soul as I undeniably stroll in to the unknown, un opened doors, leading to floors where emotions are sign posted leading to less in time we all fall, and ropes cannot hold us miss a step, take a mile lose a tear, gain a smile look at the rhyming its all gone wrong who said life was a…

03-01-2006 3:00pm

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lu22

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Dis honest hands, tried to save my soul
as I undeniably stroll in to the unknown,

un opened doors, leading to floors
where emotions are sign posted
leading to less

in time we all fall, and ropes cannot hold us
miss a step, take a mile
lose a tear, gain a smile

look at the rhyming
its all gone wrong
who said life was a perfect song

in the end its all the same
mixtures of pleasure
coupled with pain

.............. kill me with your comments im hitting a wall here !

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#2 03-01-2006 7:37pm

Custom22

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Unsure is one word, not two.

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#3 03-01-2006 11:22pm

lilmissprincess

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Sorry, but I don't get it.

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#4 04-01-2006 10:46am

gracehopper

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lu22 wrote:

in time we all fall, and ropes cannot hold us
miss a step, take a mile
lose a tear, gain a smile

I like this, its sort like an irvine welsh narration, nice one!

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#5 04-01-2006 12:52pm

rhurja

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Did you post this a while back?

I think you should let this one go.. In the immortal words of William Faulkner, "Kill your darlings".

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