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  • 22-12-2005 5:58pm
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    Le Rack
    Closed Accounts Posts: 9,846 ✭✭✭


    Burning like a fire
    Clawing at my soul,
    Knawing at my core;
    My eternal fall.

    A beast lurkes within.
    Jaws of razor teeth,
    Prowling behind,
    As I grovel at your feet.

    Just one more syllable.
    Blood boils : it rips free.
    Hate searing in the eyes.
    Making the beast me.




    My punctuation in this is diabolicle, but who knows, it may convey the anger!


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    #2
    lilmissprincess
    Registered Users Posts: 3,016 ✭✭✭lilmissprincess


    U ok Rach, that poem is Angry.......


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    #3
    Sarky
    Closed Accounts Posts: 31,967 ✭✭✭✭Sarky


    This forum is for writing and constructive criticism, not for group hugs. Take it to PMs. I'll delete stuff like Lilmissprincess' post on sight from now on. Repeated offenses will result in bannings.


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