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Silence Sleeps

lu22 · 2005-12-21 17:24:49

so silence sleeps. so happiness creeps in to my bed when i dream at night somethings not right, the pieces don't fit. I can't say good bye my heart has been hit My tears will run dry and i will not cry unless you want me to unless you beg me to you want me to care you want me to be there but i am not here my mind is so far…

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21-12-2005 6:24pm

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lu22

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so silence sleeps.
so happiness creeps
in to my bed when i dream at night

somethings not right,
the pieces don't fit.
I can't say good bye
my heart has been hit

My tears will run dry
and i will not cry
unless you want me to
unless you beg me to

you want me to care
you want me to be there
but i am not here
my mind is so far away

so danger looms over my head
and memories cling to
all the things you said

sleep silence sleep
creep happiness crepp
bring me to my knees....

I know this is really boring but when its sang it sounds beautiful !
any feed back is great.....

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#2 21-12-2005 8:50pm
BEAT

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I can definitly put this to music..I have it to a tune already.
Nice work

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#3 23-12-2005 2:24pm
TerrorFirmer

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It would make a good Metal song.

I liked it; it's well written and despite its simple form it flows well.

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