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wrote this a long time ago just puttin it up.

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  • 13-12-2005 6:32pm
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    Oakburner
    Closed Accounts Posts: 16 ✭


    fragile eggs

    flowing freely, grace the newborn
    follow slowly, never tremble
    to that sound we all hold dear
    to the fragile day old ear

    who will grow and become
    more than is imaginable
    a peak, a highest of high
    status aside

    always in your eyes the greatest
    always in your eyes the one
    never faulted, always flawless
    within lies a sea of gold


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    #2
    BEAT
    Hosted Moderators Posts: 5,945 ✭✭✭BEAT


    Im sorry no one commented on this,
    I quite like it.

    Hope to see some more of your work ;)


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    manonthemoon
    Closed Accounts Posts: 570 ✭✭✭manonthemoon


    I knd of like it too. What it about if you dont mind me asking?

    Motm


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    Oakburner
    Closed Accounts Posts: 16 ✭Oakburner


    its about how a mother see's her child. but from a third person perspective since i don't and never will know what its like to be a mother.


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    gracehopper
    Registered Users Posts: 1,144 ✭✭✭gracehopper


    decent poem, i like "fragile day old ear"


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