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lu22 · 2005-12-09 13:52:05

Dis honest hands, tried to save my soul as I undeniably stroll in to the unknown, un opened doors, leading to floors where emotions are sign posted leading to less in time we all fall, and ropes cannot hold us miss a step, take a mile lose a tear, gain a smile look at the rhyming its all gone wrong who said life was a…

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09-12-2005 2:52pm

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lu22

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Dis honest hands, tried to save my soul
as I undeniably stroll in to the unknown,

un opened doors, leading to floors
where emotions are sign posted
leading to less

in time we all fall, and ropes cannot hold us
miss a step, take a mile
lose a tear, gain a smile

look at the rhyming
its all gone wrong
who said life was a perfect song

in the end its all the same
mixtures of pleasure
coupled with pain

..... opinions welcome.. I'm not to happy with it my self but have been playing with certain parts of it for too long now im letting it go

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