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Medals For Marks

pbsuxok1znja4r · 2005-11-10 13:28:30

Short, simple piece on targets and paranoia. Enjoy. :v: Medals for Marks Though secretly I'm rated lowly lately, By peers self-professed apathetically static, My hands are shaken and I'm congratulated - While under the table my canvas is stabbed. These assassins set out on a clandestine directive To hide firmly behind the…

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10-11-2005 2:28pm

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pbsuxok1znja4r

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Short, simple piece on targets and paranoia. Enjoy. :v:

Medals for Marks

Though secretly I'm rated lowly lately,
By peers self-professed apathetically static,
My hands are shaken and I'm congratulated -
While under the table my canvas is stabbed.

These assassins set out on a clandestine directive
To hide firmly behind the far side of my fence,
And though snipers pre-tend to be mentally objective,
Their only objective is pre-tense.

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#2 10-11-2005 2:30pm
playfulkitten

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Brilliant

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#3 12-11-2005 2:07pm
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i really liked this, great words and use of language, well done

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#4 12-11-2005 8:06pm
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Amazing.

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#5 12-11-2005 9:36pm
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woah.... great stuff...

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