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  • 10-11-2005 2:26pm
    #1
    playfulkitten
    Registered Users Posts: 26 ✭


    appoliges if u think its crap!




    He took me all of me that night body mind and soul.
    Independant i stood alone,strong, tall.
    Now i stand in a turbulent sea of discontent
    Douts crashing taking me under to the murky depts of
    my sub-consious.
    A soundless scream echoed within me
    WHY??
    Alone I was strong, tall.
    Reduced to a weak crumpled wreak
    flailing agaisnt the crashing waveaken
    Lives are made andstolen in an instant
    Mine gone by his choosing
    My life blended into the vast nothiness of the bleak sea
    Darkiness faded in as i sank down
    into Oblivion
    Death stood above me now and he laughed as
    he stood alone,strong and tall


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    #2
    helpmejebus
    Closed Accounts Posts: 2 ✭helpmejebus


    depths?


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    #3
    Le Rack
    Closed Accounts Posts: 9,846 ✭✭✭Le Rack


    bit of an epic... know what you mean though! well done!


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    #4
    sportswear
    Closed Accounts Posts: 394 ✭✭sportswear


    eh . i'm sure im going to be bait for this but i just think it sounds far to pretentious.

    sorry, just my opinion, but if its your buzz then go with it.


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