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What you wanna say

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  • 09-11-2005 10:23pm
    #1
    lilmissprincess
    Registered Users Posts: 3,016 ✭✭✭


    What You wanna Say

    What, you want to explain,
    After all this time?
    Thats not really enough
    this time my friend.
    Its not me that has the problem,
    Its you and your ego
    Thats "not trying to hurt me"
    We talked all day, and cried all night,
    That once, that time
    That is no longer.
    I have written you letters,
    Your name a melody
    Once of love
    But now venomous hate
    You dislike me, do you?
    Despise me?
    I don't care.
    So explain your sorrows,
    Be gone from this place
    Be gone you demons,
    Be gone forever.


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    #2
    NoDayBut2Day
    Closed Accounts Posts: 944 ✭✭✭NoDayBut2Day


    Oh my goodness... I totally feel like that sometimes. Yesterday, in fact, I was all blah... :rolleyes: But yeah... the poem is good. :D


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    #3
    ctrl-alt-delete
    Registered Users Posts: 13,907 ✭✭✭✭ctrl-alt-delete


    maybe its supposed to but it feels a bit muddled up to me, was hard for me to read for some reason, not the best from you that i have seen, but sure keep it up


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    #4
    lilmissprincess
    Registered Users Posts: 3,016 ✭✭✭lilmissprincess


    well, basically, its about a guy who sent me a letter on Valentines day telling me how much he hated my guts, but that by telling me this he didnt want to hurt me. I read the letter the other day and wrote this.


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