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Cry, Cry

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  • 09-11-2005 12:36am
    #1
    Registered Users Posts: 142 ✭✭


    Cry, Cry

    Verse 1
    Rolling down a cheek,
    Falling from my eye,
    The tears that I cry.
    Seeing you today,
    Only reminds me of yesterday,
    And what I once was.
    Locked away,
    Dead now,
    There’s a way of killing, is this how?

    Chorus:
    Cry, cry, for the hearts that have been broken.
    Cry, cry, for the one’s who are choking.
    Love only brought us pain,
    But I think that’s how we train.

    Verse 2
    Running across my skin,
    Thinking of this regretful sin,
    All the pain I hide within.
    Trying to smile,
    But can only hide,
    I’ve put me away; I’ve put me aside.
    Reaching for a new ray of sun,
    Of all the beauty that has begun,
    And so I smile when I see the one.
    Just…

    Repeat Chorus

    Verse 3

    Think of the happiness,
    Think of the joy.
    Contemplate the weakness, yeah that was you!
    Ruminate the hardness, he only thought me a toy.
    Sacrifice the childishness, as I should be happy too.
    But I cry, cry, cry.

    Ok, another one. A bit fresher, newer than the rest. tell me wat you think.


Comments

  • Closed Accounts Posts: 944 ✭✭✭NoDayBut2Day


    I like the verses. The last line of the chorus sounds a little strange to my ears, but then again, this is a song so perhaps it might sound better with a melody? I dont' know .. sometimes I read song lyrics and think "That sounds kinda weird.." but then the melody just makes it fit or something.

    Good work ;)


  • Registered Users Posts: 3,016 ✭✭✭lilmissprincess


    This so sounds like something i wrote a while ago,except this sounds like it actually sounds good when you put music to it, then it got ripped up...its really really good. Keep it up!


  • Registered Users Posts: 142 ✭✭Nirina


    wow, thanx you two. i'm liking this one myself. ye, once music's [ut to it it'll sound much better. in fact, i have music in my head for it, jus need to write and play it out.


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