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pill poem

Silent Grape · 2004-10-23 17:56:28

here's a couple more of my poems. feel free to critisize constructively. : ) This little tiny pill, my name engraved into it etched deep inside it, twisted blindly in it This little shiny pill, round and smug Holding my name tight within it Keep it still in its gut, Keep it quiet, Dont let it out Dont let it out.

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23-10-2004 6:56pm

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Silent Grape

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here's a couple more of my poems. feel free to critisize constructively. : )

This little tiny pill,
my name engraved into it
etched deep inside it,
twisted blindly in it

This little shiny pill,
round and smug
Holding my name tight
within it

Keep it still in its gut,
Keep it quiet,
Dont let it out

Dont let it out.

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#2 24-10-2004 12:11pm
shiv

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good rhythm silent grape

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