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The Locket

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  • 31-08-2004 3:02am
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    spiritalien
    Closed Accounts Posts: 11 ✭


    The Locket
    By Kazz Falcon

    I wanted to give my love something special
    His birthday was coming up this Saturday
    The locket will represent our love 4ever
    It dawned on me
    I decided to use that description
    That was just perfect for the locket
    He will enjoy his present very much
    We had a nice quite time on his birthday
    A few friends was over
    We had a gay old time with each other
    He loved all his presents
    I was saving the best for last
    He wondered what happened to my present
    I fibbed, "I couldn't find anything."
    He does have everything
    There was nothing to give him
    He was disappointed
    All our friends went home
    He still can't believe it
    I mentioned he forgot to eat some cake
    He doesn't like eating cake; it was fattening
    I made him closed his eyes
    He didn't trust me at all
    He thought I will stuff the cake in his mouth
    THe lights was out
    A candlestick was lit on the kitchen table.
    He sat down at the table
    I screamed, "Suprise!"
    He quickly opened up his eyes
    Once again, he was disappointed
    All he saw was a small cupcake
    I knew he couldn't resist it
    I made the best damn cupcakes in the world
    He took a bite of the cupcake
    Then he grabbed his drink
    He noticed the locket in the glass.
    He was cheerful that I gave him something special
    He read the description
    "Our hearts are 4ever locked together."
    He started to cry
    It was the best birthday present he ever recieved


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    Agent Smith
    Moderators, Regional East Moderators Posts: 21,502 Mod ✭✭✭✭Agent Smith


    what this has to bo with LGB i have no idea


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    #3
    spiritalien
    Closed Accounts Posts: 11 ✭spiritalien


    agent smith wrote:
    what this has to bo with LGB i have no idea

    it was about my old boyfriend and me.

    u know, a GAY COUPLE!


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    Agent Smith
    Moderators, Regional East Moderators Posts: 21,502 Mod ✭✭✭✭Agent Smith


    ahh right....
    piece of advice, i wuldbnt post poetry and storys in any old forum....


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    #5
    spiritalien
    Closed Accounts Posts: 11 ✭spiritalien


    agent smith wrote:
    ahh right....
    piece of advice, i wuldbnt post poetry and storys in any old forum....

    what old forums?

    I am new here

    I just signed up tonight


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    Victor
    Registered Users Posts: 78,352 ✭✭✭✭Victor


    spiritalien wrote:
    u know, a GAY COUPLE!
    They have gay on the internet now?


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    Falkorre
    Closed Accounts Posts: 1,219 ✭✭✭Falkorre


    um, see, the thing is, spiritalien...........
    Gay or str8, young or old, single or attached, no-one in their right mind signs up to any forums and makes three threads each containing very um .."bizzarre" and unexplained poetry,.... it just aint polite hon.
    And it verges on forum-spamming.

    If ur gonna say somthing, make sure u explain why ur saying it is all, otherwise ur just some screwed up little guy posting insane rhyming rantings, see?

    click here to go to the creative writing forum -> http://www.boards.ie/vbulletin/forumdisplay.php?f=382 ... But some advice, *introduce yourself first*, otherwise u come across a bit crazy lol.

    B


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    #8
    swiss
    Registered Users Posts: 1,745 ✭✭✭swiss


    They also have the internet on computers.

    To the original poster, that seems a heartfelt piece. Poetry means different things to different people, so I don't know if it will get quite the reception here you expect. Incidentally, there is a Literature and creative writing board where people tend to post poetry and prose pieces, you might find it more beneficial to post such writings there.


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    Boston
    Closed Accounts Posts: 17,163 ✭✭✭✭Boston


    Victor wrote:
    They have gay on the internet now?
    Must resist urge to use time honored Victor = Anal + on the interweb joke.


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    #10
    Sleipnir
    Registered Users Posts: 5,514 ✭✭✭Sleipnir


    I think I'm diabetic after reading that.


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