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poem: out the window

  • 21-08-2004 9:49am
    #1
    JasonRoberts
    Closed Accounts Posts: 15 ✭


    A carpet like multitude of green,
    With dots of brown trunk within the scene.

    Unreachable distant golden ribbed pasture,
    Delivered raw harvest to rapture.

    Gallant white clouds a drift in the oceanic blue,
    And the gleaming energizing disk meandering too.

    Unphased herd of cows continue grazing,
    While motorized hums finish reaping.

    Summer shower bring a refreshing cool,
    Accompanied by the shrubs much needed fuel.

    Touch of the season’s warmth or wet still ignites a playful joy,
    Like a child rediscovering a lost toy.


    Wat do you think, how could i improve?


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  • #2
    Soxi
    Closed Accounts Posts: 21 ✭Soxi


    ~ o, how I love this world ~

    I'm not a poet, but I like it!
    not every line has to rhyme... but it doesn't matter if it does!!! :cool:


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