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The Ending

  • 18-07-2004 12:47am
    #1
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 96 ✭✭


    Still, empty, lost
    My sanity is being tossed
    Explanations unprovided
    Future still undecided
    Tears dripping off my face
    Anger must not be displaced
    Instead it will disperse
    Releasing me from this curse

    Dreams were once confined
    Shattered now, it will take time
    To rebuild what has gone
    The person I was all along
    I need to you to repent
    Even though it was not meant
    Destruction and pain caused
    My life stagnant, paused

    The walls of my reality
    Turned to vapour choking me
    Lacking of solid ground
    You held the key that I found
    Poison pulsing through my veins
    Couldn't take more of the strain
    I seeked only truth
    Through the torture of my youth

    And so it comes to an end
    The love to us that time did lend
    My heart bursts with longing
    As yet another day is dawning
    Sitting here in sorrow
    There is no more time left to borrow
    Future together disappeared
    Nothing left, it's as we feared


Comments

  • Closed Accounts Posts: 1,012 ✭✭✭munkeehaven


    i like your style, and you are good at the oul rhyming which i could never do!.....and its the kind of poem everyone can relate to in varying degrees......


  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 96 ✭✭Battlesnake


    Glad you like :)


  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 1,167 ✭✭✭Shad0r


    The walls of my reality
    Turned to vapour choking me
    I seeked only truth
    Through the torture of my youth


    I love these lines. Fantastic imagry and feeling. Keep up the good work Battlesnake.


  • Closed Accounts Posts: 574 ✭✭✭Silent Grape


    shouldnt it be 'i sought only truth'....?

    good poem though!

    mx


  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 96 ✭✭Battlesnake


    shouldnt it be 'i sought only truth'....?

    Clearly been out of the classroom for too long!
    Thanx for correction


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