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True love never dies (adult content)

  • 24-06-2004 10:45am
    #1
    Agent Orange
    Closed Accounts Posts: 448 ✭✭


    The bedroom air is stale
    But my heart is full of glee
    She's lying on my bed
    I'm as happy as can be

    She lies motionless
    As I pull off her grey pants
    She doesn't make a sound
    As I shoo away the ants

    I wrap her legs around me
    Make love on the putrid bed
    Her lips are cold against me
    Does it matter that she's dead?


Comments

  • #2
    uberwolf
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 7,581 ✭✭✭uberwolf


    :eek:


  • #3
    Shallow-Vision
    Closed Accounts Posts: 19 ✭Shallow-Vision


    oh ........ my....... god........ NECROPHILIA ! ! :p thats ..em different :eek:


  • #4
    Emboss
    Closed Accounts Posts: 1,163 ✭✭✭Emboss


    it doesn't really matter that she's dead, i'd be more worried about them grey pants...


  • #5
    Shanannigan
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 1,227 ✭✭✭Shanannigan


    i like it... i hope it's not based on real events though


  • #6
    Shad0r
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 1,167 ✭✭✭Shad0r


    haha, that's fvcked!
    Dark, very dark. I love it.

    Seriously, it kept me guessing until the last line and at the end it wasnt what I thought it would be.


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  • #7
    sceptre
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 19,608 ✭✭✭✭sceptre


    Set it to music and Monty Python would have been crawling over themselves to use it.


  • #8
    munkeehaven
    Closed Accounts Posts: 1,012 ✭✭✭munkeehaven


    very good in its creepiness...:)


  • #9
    Gordon
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 35,524 ✭✭✭✭Gordon


    I would have preferred some kind of - unzip the flies - connotation, as ants just... well they just don't do it for me.


  • #10
    simu
    Closed Accounts Posts: 10,730 ✭✭✭✭simu


    Reminds me of a poem I did at uni where the poet asks the woman he's trying to seduce if she wants to keep her virginity for the worms in her tomb! You might be interested!
    Thy beauty shall no more be found,
    Nor, in thy marble vault, shall sound
    My echoing song: then worms shall try
    That long preserved virginity:
    And your quaint honor turn to dust,
    And into ashes all my lust:
    The grave's a fine and private place,
    But none, I think, do there embrace...

    an excerpt from "To his coy mistress" by Andrew Marvell.


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