Clingfilm Poet

Beatrix

This That Made The Rhymes


Slow metaphors have painted marble statues
The ink that you may choose to use
In gazing at the stars

Carefully connected in the clearness of a morning
There shall be no baby forming
In your dreams of monotone

Clothes that you collected to remember Summer days
Each one that you saved displayed the error of your ways
In coloured waves

Every breath you choose to take in the stories you shall make
Shall paint one thousand smiles across the moon

Cacophonies rise to be found mirrored in the skies
You will find each note surprised
Like silence in the guise of some sunrise




This is one of my latest poems... I just thought I'd post it to see the general opinion. I'd love to see what you all think!!!

BEAT

I do give credit where credit is due and in this case,
I think this is easily one of the best poems ever posted in creative writing.
Well done Beatrix...bravo...and all that sort of thing.

If you have more I would love to see you post them, I am very interested.

Beatrix

The Cottage

A flicker sparks
To pass me by
No orange glimmer
For my eye
A firestory
To beguile
But nothing said
Is still worthwhile

Darkness frames
The window pane
And battling stars
Refuse to wane
The grey cat licks
Its soft, clean paws
It's owner kneels
To take a pause
From daily life
Irish housewife

Shallow-Vision

brilliant wats wit "clingfilm poet " though ??? :dunno:

Beatrix

The name is like poetry... down to interpretation

Shallow-Vision

smart ..... very very smart

Beatrix

Do you write poetry Vision?

Shallow-Vision

im pretty damn crap and embarrased about my poetry i just write wat i feel , ill post some of it later on...

Beatrix

I'm embarrassed of my poetry too. I'd like to see yours though

Shad0r

You know, if I've said it once I've said it a thousand times:

The main reason I don't generally like poetry is because so often it is nothing more than lazyman's prose. There is so little effort, as far as time and commitment go, in most of the poetry I've read since I finished school - and the internet is a cesspool like no other - that I find it really hard to wade through the oceans of shite material in search of decent poetry. (Incidentally my own poetry is the worst your ever likely to read...)

But every now and again you find a piece of poetry that makes all the wading worthwhile. It renews your belief that in fact decent poetry does exist and, well, shit on a shingle if it isn't worth looking for.

Thanks Beatrix. Keep up the good work.

seantí

I agree with you shad0r, there is so much bad poetry written in the world, and everyone who writes nice poems is always modest.

Beatrix

*hides under a table in the corner with a big red head on me*

Thanks a million ppls... I might work harder now :S lol I need stuff to learnnnnnnn from ... post your poems before I die from malpoetrition! *giggles*


Miss Potter

Shewhomustbe...

Beatrix,

you make me want to try again, and give me reason to try harder.

Beatrix

Thankies!!!! I'm gonna write moreeeeeeeee and more and more and you'll all be sick of me lol

xx

Beatrix

There was no sugar for my tea
Life always bode that way for me

Blue skies masquerade as sea
Pure white doves are crows to be

What direction should I take?
The woody path or pearly gate?
I take the woody path to look
And see my way stopped by bad luck

The road not taken was probably best
Words otherwise are only jest
Mark well the fact that I impart
The way to succeed is never start

Shanannigan

i loik it a lot

Shallow-Vision

i lovee your poetry.....

BEAT

yes, it seems we all agree we like your stuff...be sure and remember to post a new thread when posting new poetry so we know when something new is up

thanks.

Beatrix

But would that not take up a load of space? Okee well your wish is my command

xx Beatrix xx

BEAT

Perhaps you will need your own thread for your posts if they will be mulitple, we shall see. I will think over the best way, maybe 3 poems per thread?



"Beatrix's Poems thread"



/me ponders

Beatrix

*feels like a stooperstar!* lol Ok well whatever, it's cool with me!!