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Shakespearen Sonnet*

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  • 12-06-2004 11:36am
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    Raphael
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    Young, joyous birdsong fills the morning air
    Out in the meadows, children dance and play
    Underneath the trees, Dogs escape the glare
    Rolling around in fresh dew covered hay

    God smiles down on sunlit days like this one
    On his throne in heaven up above us
    Its days like this he sees what he has done
    Now he can see why he made the world thus

    Truly days like this are what heaven is
    Only gods creations are so complete
    Here is an example of what is his
    Even heavens days could not be so sweet

    Light shines from heaven, brightening the day
    Love is in the air, joy is here to stay



    I was really bored. This poem has a huge double meaning as well, cookie to the first person who finds it


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    dod
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    Originally posted by Raphael

    I was really bored. This poem has a huge double meaning as well, cookie to the first person who finds it

    "You're going to Hell"

    I want my cookie.


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    Raphael
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    Damn, that obvious eh?

    Ah well, no cookie, its actually "Your goin to hell"


    HAH!


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    Le Rack
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    Aonghus, I know, its feeling the realisation of true love and how wonderful it is, as we both know in "strong" and "powerful" ways......... and on the other side its the realisation that this perfection and bliss will come to a horrible end as nothing lasts forever.... or as dod so nicely put "your going to hell"


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    Piste
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    I have a habit of looking for acrostics in poems....


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    Le Rack
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    Cookie.................


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    lilmissprincess
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    Raphael wrote:
    Damn, that obvious eh?

    Ah well, no cookie, its actually "Your goin to hell"


    HAH!

    ya well i cant see it ull hav ta explain it more fully to me...maybe tuesday..or online.
    see ya aonghus
    ****trilo*****


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    BEAT
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    Read the first letter of each sentence going down ,
    so basically read the left column of letters going down and you see the words written out ;)


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    lilmissprincess
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    aha..thank you. The sun ın Turkey ıs ruinin my head...ı get ıt now...


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    Talliesin
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    A literary magazine once published a poem without anyone spotting the acrostic "ALL EDITORS ARE BASTARDS"


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    lilmissprincess
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    Talliesin wrote:
    A literary magazine once published a poem without anyone spotting the acrostic "ALL EDITORS ARE BASTARDS"

    Wow...youd think that they would look once ın a whıle...kında funny tho..what magazıne??


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    Talliesin
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    Some American small circulation thing (you know, the sort that publish poems...) around the start of the Beatnik period (the poet was Beat, the magazine wasn't).


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