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  • 06-05-2004 7:43pm
    #1
    fizzynicenice
    Closed Accounts Posts: 466 ✭✭


    feeling strange, am i supposed to?
    thinking maybe
    drunk already?
    thats okay, so are you

    joke and laugh, another mate,
    oh wait
    films starting
    funny how, time will pass

    trying to act, clean and sober
    like the night
    nearly over
    shiver running, down my back

    not left, not right, think boy, oh ****é
    through the brown, of the bottle
    i see you, not
    standing there
    stop the thinking, head hung down

    bussing home the 29a,
    another chanch
    for another saturday.

    -disjointed, yes but hey what do i care


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    #2
    BEAT
    Hosted Moderators Posts: 5,945 ✭✭✭BEAT


    Simple and clear...I actually like it ;) a few errors in placement of comma, colon's etc..but I still liked it for the most part.


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