Cat Animation

MidnightQueen

I'm looking for your opinions on my animation. Its my very first animation project and i've been working on it for a while now! Cheers a million

http://members.boards.ie/kittykat/Tommy%20Jewels.swf

chewy

you need a like it needs more work option

Oriel

*Before reading any further, please note that I'm in one bitch of a mood. Sorry.

Firstly, if that's an "Error 404, file not found" or a "page under construction" notice, I'd be very, very annoyed. Those pages are bad enough, without making them blood-curdlingly-annoying.

- Colours are too bright
- I don't like cats. A lot of people don't.
- Flash is able to generate animation a lot smoother than that.
- The suns "thingys" (rays, whatever) change speeds.
- The credits last for nearly the same time as the "animation" itself.
- Aren't mice supposed to hate cats, not give them joints? :-)
- The cat moves about between the "scene cuts"
- Also, the mouse runs off to a white background.
- The anmimation, in genreral is too large. Cut the size in half at least.


The only thing I like about this is the final screen about the page being "up in smoke". Even that page has something fcuked up going on to the top right of the first 'T' of "This". Can you not just make sime animation based on this page alone?



(Please pray that I never become a primary school teacher)

S.

MidnightQueen

Originally posted by Sinecure

- Colours are too bright
- I don't like cats. A lot of people don't.
- Flash is able to generate animation a lot smoother than that.
- The suns "thingys" (rays, whatever) change speeds.
- The credits last for nearly the same time as the "animation" itself.
- Aren't mice supposed to hate cats, not give them joints? :-)
- The cat moves about between the "scene cuts"
- Also, the mouse runs off to a white background.
- The anmimation, in genreral is too large. Cut the size in half at least.

The only thing I like about this is the final screen about the page being "up in smoke". Even that page has something fcuked up going on to the top right of the first 'T' of "This". Can you not just make sime animation based on this page alone?

S.

Thanks for the advice I had to base my animation on cats because it was the main topic. I'm a college student and it was my first attempt at an animation. Wasnt that bad was it? The whole idea was to make the animation a bit abstract so instead of cats hateing mice. I made the mouse like the cat. I have to do something about the colours alrite but the background it had to be my own drawing.

Thanks again greatly appreciated

Kold

Originally posted by KittyKat
The whole idea was to make the animation a bit abstract so instead of cats hateing mice. I made the mouse like the cat.

FFS, now I've got milk up my nose