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  • 22-04-2004 6:57pm
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    Lyconix
    Registered Users Posts: 455 ✭✭


    Shining concordium
    Ordered and new
    Efficient device
    Focused and true
    Cold metal construct
    Slight but endowed
    Gives way to a wave
    Corrupting and loud.


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    BEAT
    Hosted Moderators Posts: 5,945 ✭✭✭BEAT


    hmmm, short yet concise..interesting enough...
    I can dig it ;)


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    Lafortezza
    Registered Users Posts: 8,806 ✭✭✭Lafortezza


    Reads like random words from the dictionary to me...
    Whats it all about eh?


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    flogen
    Moderators, Society & Culture Moderators Posts: 10,243 Mod ✭✭✭✭flogen


    I gather its the modern disrupting the natural... or thats what i get anyway... I like it... took me afew reads, but I like it.

    It made me think of those wind farms, or something like that...

    Flogen


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    alleepally
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    I'm reading very literally but this is about Concorde, yes?

    Last 2 lines are about it breaking through the sound barrier.


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    BEAT
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    I can not speak for the original poster but I am almost sure I know what this poem represents and I do not think you are correct alleepally.

    we will see what the creator has to say ;)


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    alleepally
    Closed Accounts Posts: 2,027 ✭✭✭alleepally


    Well 'cmon then Beat, put your interpretation down as well!


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    MojoMaker
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    Missile/warhead of some sort, possibly nuclear?


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