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Magnum Opus

Lyconix · 2004-04-22 17:57:01

Shining concordium Ordered and new Efficient device Focused and true Cold metal construct Slight but endowed Gives way to a wave Corrupting and loud.

22-04-2004 5:57pm

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Lyconix

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Shining concordium
Ordered and new
Efficient device
Focused and true
Cold metal construct
Slight but endowed
Gives way to a wave
Corrupting and loud.

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#2 29-04-2004 3:03am

BEAT

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hmmm, short yet concise..interesting enough...
I can dig it

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#3 30-04-2004 5:06pm

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Reads like random words from the dictionary to me...
Whats it all about eh?

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#4 30-04-2004 7:07pm

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I gather its the modern disrupting the natural... or thats what i get anyway... I like it... took me afew reads, but I like it.

It made me think of those wind farms, or something like that...

Flogen

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#5 16-05-2004 10:45pm

alleepally

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I'm reading very literally but this is about Concorde, yes?

Last 2 lines are about it breaking through the sound barrier.

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#6 17-05-2004 2:50am

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I can not speak for the original poster but I am almost sure I know what this poem represents and I do not think you are correct alleepally.

we will see what the creator has to say

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#7 17-05-2004 10:27am

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Well 'cmon then Beat, put your interpretation down as well!

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#8 18-05-2004 2:32pm

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Missile/warhead of some sort, possibly nuclear?

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