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Why is it I cannot remain ?

  • 06-04-2004 1:28am
    #1
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 598 ✭✭✭


    My life as a whole is somewhat malnurished.It remains to be seen if im talkin ..just rubbish.My brain calls on me when it so requires,but fails to connect the all important wires.
    My mission is simple my signals are less,,I cannot comprehend the meaning of chess,
    I can just but waffle when needs do require ,
    I need help very quick afore my brain does expire
    But riddle me slowly and riddle me quick
    it may not be long before i do a trick
    It will ruffle no feathers and cause but a murmer,
    bit the treamors it sends will reach a lot further
    The modus operandi will come back on me again,
    Why is life by most people..treated as pain


Comments

  • Closed Accounts Posts: 199 ✭✭Doctor Funfrock


    complete crap sorry


  • Moderators, Society & Culture Moderators Posts: 10,247 Mod ✭✭✭✭flogen


    while Funrock is nothing but a troll, I must say I agree somewhat.
    The issue your describing is very very regular, its nothing more than teen angst, and so, to set yourself apart you need to be more creative.

    Its badly structured, with bad rhymes for the sake of rhymes.

    You need to be more strict with your work, theres nothing wrong with using writing as a means of venting, i always do it, but dont be under any illusion that they have artistic merit.

    I hate to be so blunt, but i think you could possibly have something if you just try, like most people tbh

    Flogen


  • Closed Accounts Posts: 199 ✭✭Doctor Funfrock


    haha what is your problem??


  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 598 ✭✭✭[DF]Lenny


    Errr..Alcoholism..this was meant for a different forum tbh,well oiled when written.


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