"Love can come in any format"

Webmonkey

Ok well I don't like english and i dunno if this poem makes any sense but well i'll post it anywayz :

"Love can come in any format"

The communication that I have with you,
That of which is bytes of text through
a internet protocal is much more than
the eye sees.

It is something of the extraordinary
Something that can't be explained
Each charactor of text has a meaning behind it
A multi dimensional meaning that is beyond 3D
Each dimension adding onto the previous, adding
something of worth and meaning...
A dimension of caring, a dimension of feeling.

Perhaps it all makes up the mother of all good feelings...

Perhaps it is love

MrVestek

Ok seriously... i love computers and all myself but... you need to get out more. Writing a poem about a computer?!?! ..............

Webmonkey

lol, well I actually get out a load, hanging with friends, i spend hardly no time on computers, just few hours each evening .

I was bored

MrVestek

LOL Bored? Yeah... thought as much :P

yellum

Originally posted by Achilles
Ok seriously... i love computers and all myself but... you need to get out more.

Coming from the guy constantly wearing spock ears thats pretty amusing.

I like it, its nice that some people are bracing the present and acknowledging things which are now standard in society.

Ballard and Burroughs user to take new technologies and twist and form them into prose. It was refreshing from works still living in the past.

More of this webmonkey.

Webmonkey

Thanks

MrVestek

Lol, i dont even have a pair of spock ears.... although i wish i did. I never dissed the poem, it shows some talent... but for me writing love poetry about a peice of technology just doesn't seem right. But at the end of the day we all have our own opinions and we're all entitled to them, so keep up the good, if slightly unusual, work.

Webmonkey

Well I don't see myself becoming a poet, I wouldn't like the profession really but well I don't see whats wrong with modern things involved in Love poems

later

MrVestek

Considering the post you just left on my bebo page, erm, I still think you're quite sad for having post this. You felt this *hurt* after some off the cuff remarks I made about this quite pathetic poem THREE DAMN YEARS AGO?!

You really do need a life...