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bizmark · 12-12-2003 1:45pm #1

Anyway after around 13 hour's

Odyssey Galaxy class site

it isnt finished yet still have a lot of work ahead how ever most pages are up and have something on them.

Feedback wanted:)

feylya · 12-12-2003 1:48pm

Hmm, not bad. You missplet Weapon though. The navigation is very odd for some reason. I'm probably just used to having it on the other side. A lot of the text is very squashed on some of the pages too. But for a quick site, it's not bad.

bizmark · 12-12-2003 1:53pm

Squashed how so ?

:ninja: lol im new at this html really

feylya · 12-12-2003 1:55pm

In the class history section, the text just seems crowded in there. Personally, I'd put in a header onto the top of the table and add some padding. Maybe smaller text or a different font.

bizmark · 12-12-2003 1:56pm

Or some pictures to break up the HUGE block of text

feylya · 12-12-2003 2:01pm

Yeah, something like that. Again, it's just my opinion. Still, cool site all the same.

Woden · 12-12-2003 2:24pm

cool stuff bizmark i think captain is spelt wrong with respect to the captains yacht on that page :eek:

also at the moment the blueprints and picture and size chart sections don't seem to be working.

i like the snapshot from the dominion war with the large amount of fed ships though its cool

bizmark · 12-12-2003 2:28pm

also at the moment the blueprints and picture and size chart sections don't seem to be working.

Their not ready yet

Iv changed the class history abit adding a few pictures

think captain is spelt wrong

Ya being half blind from the montor and a normal crapness at spelling wll be showing up:)

Woden · 12-12-2003 11:13pm

the class history is better now with the pictures and its breaks it up well like feyla suggested.

bizmark · 14-12-2003 5:38am

Added a good few new things includeing blueprints and size charts

simu · 14-12-2003 12:13pm

I like the look of it but watch out for spelling mistakes:

Updates not Update's, thrusters not thrusters - there is no apostrophe if you're just using the plural of a noun.

Dorsal not Dorsel.

Jean-Luc Picard not jean-luc-picard

There may be more, I'm not a walking spell-checker!

When you have lists, why do some words start with capitals while other ones don't?

For example:

Length:
641 meters
width:
467.1 meters
height:
137.5 meters
Displacement:
4,500,000 metric ton's
Crew:
1,012 persons

It would look more regular if you used punctuation in a uniform manner.

These are just minor quibbles, though - overall, it looks quite cool.

bizmark · 14-12-2003 12:44pm

Noted and being fixed as fast as i can

bizmark · 14-12-2003 2:43pm

most of them should be fixed now

Woden · 14-12-2003 2:58pm

Hey bizmark it looks good, i like the size chart, the look of all the different fed ships together is cool and the blueprints look nice

LastIrishMonkey · 16-12-2003 2:57am

nice site, well done.

bizmark · 16-12-2003 1:34pm

Thank you

iv just added all the deck blueprints to the site over 6 meg of blueprints just for the decks of the ship (42 in all)

Woden · 16-12-2003 8:30pm

hi bizmark, the blueprints by deck are cool, the link to the main bridge gif there doesn't seem to be working, is this feature still to be added?

bizmark · 16-12-2003 9:14pm

opps ill add that now

bizmark · 16-12-2003 9:20pm

done

Cabaal · 21-12-2003 11:35am

You might want to put the site updates/news the other way around
Latest at the top rather then the way you have it.
Much easier to ready the site then...

bizmark · 21-12-2003 7:38pm

ya ill do all that after Xmas

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