Mary and Jane's Enlightment

The Second · 01-12-2003 7:37pm #1

Once upon a time in a cosmopolitan place far, far from here... there was a night club, where people went in and never came out. The queue for entry went on for infinity. Although people skipped, and often tried to pay their way in, they were always refused. For you see.. this was a ticket affair. Scalpers couldn't sell tickets, as no one knew what they looked like ... the tickets that is. Inside this night club money mean't nothing. Age mean't nothing. Clothes mean't nothing, cause once inside you would have no need for a body, you would have no need for anything. Music was all that was needed.

After hearing about the club two girls set off one day ... in search of what nobody knew. They travelled, then travelled some more. Once they arrived at the club they then had to travel to the end of the queue, which took some time considering it went on for infinity!
As Jane and Mary waited patiently in line they would have conversations with the people around them about what might actually be in the club, what was so good that no body would want to .. or have the need to leave? Waiting in line, for what seemed like forever, Jane and Mary learned alot about the people around them. One particular person by the name of Bob. Bob had a coolness about him, like he wasn't waiting. He was a quiet man who like to listen to the girls stories, and their ideas about what may be inside the club. At this point neither girl had an idea of how to get a ticket, but this didn't seem to bother them as,"everything always works itself out in the end", suggested Mary.

Time passed and it was the girls turn to enter the Club. There was no bouncer, only a door made out of stone. As the girls stood in amazement, Bob gently passed by grabbing a hand each of the girls, pulling them swiftly into the stone door. Just as their reflex action of closing their eyes had ended they found themselves in what appeared to be their home town. Bob had brought them home! ... "How can this be??", thought Jane. "Well you see..", said Bob, "I am the ticket... as you will now be for all you encounter along your ways". Looking at each other in amazment the girls knew something was different... walking though the door at the club had changed them... they couldn't tell where they had been... but they knew things now.. including how to bring others there!

Mary and Jane have been watching others and creating tickets ever since.
They now reside in Co. Louth, Ireland and can be contacted on 0429356895 if you looking for a ticket to the club. Although on weekends they prefare to be known as Mark and Jack.

passive · 03-12-2003 12:29am

i liked that...it was pretty interesting...
its left me really curious..not quite curious enough to call that number (though...its tempting) but really....huh?