Lilly in the Rain

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I see one lilly,
late in Feburary,
early in March,
its head drooped,
under a heavy shower....

From my window,
the lilly shudders,
under the pelting arsenal,
the rain blurrs my vision
and hides the pain.

I look to the fire and wish for summer,
I then look to the lilly and I long for spring.

Ger

(i wrote this a long time ago...)

Kappar

I really liked this poem.

I really liked this phrase "under the pelting arsenal," it shows an bad side of nature attacking, forcing itself.

Very nice keep it up.

CuLT

Originally posted by Kappar
I really liked this poem.

I really liked this phrase "under the pelting arsenal," it shows an bad side of nature attacking, forcing itself.

Very nice keep it up.

Yeah, "Arsenal" "a bad side" , perhaps a deeper meaning?

Lily is spelt with one l , unless you're using poetic license for some reason. Just saying

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lily / lilly ...feck it


pelting arsenal...saying rain fall on small plants is comparable to artillary....

Kappar

Originally posted by CuLT
Yeah, "Arsenal" "a bad side" , perhaps a deeper meaning?

Lily is spelt with one l , unless you're using poetic license for some reason. Just saying

LOL, Very subtle.