My first go - title "The Madman?"

This is the beginning of a new story I;ve been working on what do you think. ALso There was a man who talked to em about the stories and he said some things to me to do and I can tell you about them on Wednesday if you want to hear it

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It was night. The street was deserted except for some streetlights, some darkness where there wasn't streetlights, a man walking along, and a cigarette smoking itself in the shadows.

The man walked towards the cigarette...

Aint you gonna ask me what I'm doin here? Said a cloud of smoke. The man squinted his eyes and could see a man on the outside of the cigarette. And a hat on top of the man.

"What are you doing h.." started to say the man but another cloud of smoke came interruptingly towards him and part of it went in his ears "I have ta warn ya". Said the words. "Warn you about the Umra Gazoul" "Umra Gazoul what's th..." the man tried to say but Trent wasn't in the mood to hear the end of that sentence and started talking again. Your my milkman, right? That means theyve probably already got to you. without you even noticing probably. Do you remember being kidnapped and drugged and hypnotised into becoming a secret killer at any point in the last few days?

POONK! A blow pipe arrow landed in the neck of the possible secret killer,definite milkman who wasn't hiding in the shadows. Trent caught the ex-milkman and ducked into a doorway just as another hail of Blowpipe bullets K-THOONKED! into the streetlamp.

But the milkman wasn't quite ex! He was trying to answer Trent "Krgl....! Kroorgl....! Blgl....!..... ...." But none of it was words. MERCY SNUFFING! Trent gently yet brutally snapped the milkman's neck, then using his own neck, looked up at where the sky would be if it wasn't dark. "Nooooooooo!" Said Trent. Umra Gazoul had found him. Of all the secret terrorist organisations that he was battling against, this was the worst. And now he'd have to nip to the shops in the morning...

Still waiting on a couple of things before I can tell you about the new Trent news. In the meantime here are some outtakes/deleted scenes. What do you think?

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Trent's First Day

Trent was 21 years old (Trent wasn't 21 years old, it was a flashback). It was a flashback and Trent was standing in front of the police chief.

Your off the case! Shouted the police chief. And you have 24 hours to solve the case! shouted the police chief.
Now get out there with your partner before I throw you off the case and take your badge!

Goddamn rookies said the police chief to himself as he ate a doughnut and combed his moustahce and sucked up to the mayor. Trent looked at his partner, he was a different height to trent, and a different colour to trent and he didnt think the same things! And he was a woman! They were totally mismatched!

'OK Rookie - get in the car.' Said trents partner as she jumped onto the bonnet and started sliding towards the drivers door. Trent quickly jumped onto the bonnet too and headed her off at the number plate and slid faster than her into the drivers seat. "Need a ride?" said trent as he fired up the 119hp engine and kickslammed the car into a skid in front of the woman.

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Trent and the Questionable Beauty

Trent was in yet another hotel, his business seemed to demand this often but he didn't mind, he liked all you can eat breakfasts. The names Smith, JOHN Smith said Trent, easily fooling the man. Trent went up to his room and put his tuxedos in the cupboard and his wetsuit and combat strikeforce gear. Then he looked around the room... hairdryer, teabags with strings on, television that didn't have the good channels. But something was missing...

INTERNATIONAL ESPIONAGE! Trent quickly opened the bathroom door and a beautiful foreign agent with a heart of gold fell out. Aha! Said Trent after some light wrestling over the little gun she had been planning to get him with. "I'll never tell you who im working f.." Started to say the woman but Trent kissed the argument back into her face. Now she was a double agent at least, and only time would tell if she was triple or higher.