I swear I'm not trolling...

Mellor · 29-03-2012 2:11am

Ring your editor, paraphrase the female's lines in the book in to the convo.
Have a stop watch, you start when he does.

As for the book. It might make for better reading if there is a bit of mental build up to the action, then about 90secs of high intensity.

Zamboni · 29-03-2012 11:18am

This whole thread reminded me of this...

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=66wERljMnmU

wilkie2006 · 29-03-2012 11:38am

Maybe your editor has a point though. I mean, whether it's physically possible or not, the fact that she expressed scepticism means that your readers are likely to as well. Unless you're going to add a footnote, people will just assume that you're wrong.

EileenG · 29-03-2012 1:19pm

UL_heart_throb wrote: »

eileeng is this picked up by mills and boon? You need to get a throbbing manhood in there somewhere.

Throbbing manhood will get me sacked. This editor is very big into what is physically possible, and manhoods don't actually throb (not unless you hit them with a hammer or something). And we won't even discuss the long list of things that women's body parts don't do.

EileenG · 29-03-2012 1:22pm

wilkie2006 wrote: »

Maybe your editor has a point though. I mean, whether it's physically possible or not, the fact that she expressed scepticism means that your readers are likely to as well. Unless you're going to add a footnote, people will just assume that you're wrong.

I'm going to reread the scene, see if I can see what tripped her up. But I suspect she may not know that many bb types.

Thud · 29-03-2012 1:39pm

i think the Japanese have this as a competitive sport now....not going to google it for you while i'm at work though

EileenG · 29-03-2012 3:15pm

:eek:

wilkie2006 · 29-03-2012 4:05pm

EileenG wrote: »

I'm going to reread the scene, see if I can see what tripped her up. But I suspect she may not know that many bb types.

What's a "bb type"? (or do I want to know?)

EileenG · 29-03-2012 4:40pm

Body builder.

dougieruggie · 29-03-2012 5:07pm

I can only speak from personal experience but anywhere in the region of 8-10 hours.

EileenG · 29-03-2012 5:27pm

dougieruggie wrote: »

I can only speak from personal experience but anywhere in the region of 8-10 hours.

Will you marry me?

Mellor · 30-03-2012 3:15am

dougieruggie wrote: »

I can only speak from personal experience but anywhere in the region of 8-10 hours.

Erectile dysfunction muct be a real passion killer

EileenG · 11-07-2012 9:19am

And if any of you want to know how useful your responses were, the book I was researching is finally out.

http://www.amazon.com/Angels-Demons-and-Doms-ebook/dp/B00851VXXO/ref=sr_1_3?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1337704416&sr=1-3

Zamboni · 11-07-2012 9:46am

Congrats.
I for one hope you make a mint like that 50 Shades of Sh1te book and come back and bring us all out for steak

Legits · 11-07-2012 9:58am

EileenG wrote: »

And if any of you want to know how useful your responses were, the book I was researching is finally out.

http://www.amazon.com/Angels-Demons-and-Doms-ebook/dp/B00851VXXO/ref=sr_1_3?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1337704416&sr=1-3

Gongrats.

I honestly read the title and thought Doms meant Delayed onset of muscle soreness.
I then read the synopsis and was very confused.

Hanley · 11-07-2012 10:48am

Legits wrote: »

Gongrats.

I honestly read the title and thought Doms meant Delayed onset of muscle soreness.
I then read the synopsis and was very confused aroused.

FYP

Michael 09 · 11-07-2012 11:17am

Who is the dude on the cover? And why didn't you have open auditions on the forum to see who gets to do it :mad:

kevpants · 11-07-2012 12:24pm

Hanley wrote: »

FYAP

FYP:D

Thud · 11-07-2012 2:24pm

I'll never look at vanilla ice cream the same way again..

Did you change the paragraph in the end, how long did it take him?

Tigger · 12-07-2012 1:14am

this thread is a load of wank

I swear I'm not trolling...

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