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cut glass magic

  • 20-07-2008 6:40pm
    #1
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 9,706 ✭✭✭


    This a story about a medicines woman's daughter and a farm boy in a fantasy world.

    The story starts where the human kingdom has a fragile treaty with the goblns and the forest.
    The humans of the kingdom have their own factions: Wizards, Priests, Surfs and Royalty.

    The two charcters are caught up in the broils of the human goblin relations.

    The wizards and priests practice a magic through stain glassed windows.

    I will start this story with a history of when the humans first came to land.




    The first goblin wars

    Long ago, the water flowed from mountains to the sea.
    Mountain ridge corralled the clouds and fleece their waters free.

    The forest grow robust watered by clouds caught from the sea.
    The earth was think and lush across the spines of all trees,
    and goblins flourished freely in the shade of many leaves.

    Long ago, the boats sailed in with billowed cloth on rigid beams
    and brought humans to forests lands to began a new regime.

    They cleaved some trees and lined their spines into a fortress wall
    and gouged the land under their plow around their new stronghold.
    Still, skirmishes between goblin and man were few in days of old.

    Long ago, the loggers trawled the lumber out to sea.
    The human kingdoms expanded were the trees used to be.

    A town formed round the fortress. Ports branched into the sea.
    and farms sprawled across the land as far as the eye could see
    and there was first war with the goblins over the rights of trees.


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  • Closed Accounts Posts: 423 ✭✭sitout


    semi interesting in a b lord of the rings kinda way!


  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 9,706 ✭✭✭Matt Holck


    And the Goblins Sang
    This unexpected company
    is cuting away our shady trees
    and out among the bare debris
    we cannot see in day at all.

    They cut their plows into lost grounds
    and more sail in and build the town.
    We must make them stop.

    While the sun is high and hot
    and has dried their feilds and browned their crops,
    we'll set fire to every plot,
    and burn the humans out.
    And the humans straved in that winter
    and grow mad in their hunger
    and set fire to the forest
    whose lumber was their bread butter.

    And no one won and many lost
    until borders were drawn
    in a treaty for peace.


  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 9,706 ✭✭✭Matt Holck


    and peace stuck out like a sore thumb
    like the crumbled remains of forest burned.
    Though much of the forests remained,
    the humans saw new land to be gained.

    Across the burned cleared plains,
    new farms sprang.
    An industry to sustain the humans
    as logging was no longer an option.

    But by the treaty, that was not human land,
    and they suffered raid by goblin bands.
    Knights in armor to protect the farmers
    became the lords of the uncovered lands.


  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 9,706 ✭✭✭Matt Holck


    Now, the goblins and ferries were familiar with human kind
    for barbarians live in the mountain climbs
    but the barbarians never cared to descend
    into the forest lands.


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    Where barbarian elders go to die.

    On the side of Mirror Lake Mountain,
    opens the cave of black water well.
    Elder barbarians explore the tunnels,
    never to return again.

    They shed their bodies within
    and stir together in cavern winds.
    The catacombs catch their soul, their breath.
    The black water well collects their deaths.

    …Those that enter hear the whisper…
    “Come and ride the carousel
    cradled in the caverns.
    Put pain aside and shirk the bell
    that once called to your hunger.
    We will turn eternally
    brushing through each other.
    We’ve shed our skin to earthen walls
    held closely in the under.”


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    image credit http://www.craftconn.com


  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 9,706 ✭✭✭Matt Holck


    Wizards mix the liquid death within molten glass

    The wizards know of the black water well
    and built a portal next to the pool
    that leads to where the wizards dwell
    to tap the deaths shed by the old
    for their magic spells.

    They stir death into molten sand
    and spread the mix on plates of gold.
    Stained glass is cut to window patterns
    and to the churches sold.

    Death poured into glass
    adds magic to the craft.
    But a broken window,
    spills a death as a shadow.
    A shadow that seeks
    to take life to be complete.
    But of these deaths, not wizard or priest
    dares to speak.

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    image credit
    http://www.myglassshop.com/classes.htm


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  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 9,706 ✭✭✭Matt Holck


    /split/rays
    cutpatterns/
    c|a|g|e|s
    L O O M


  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 9,706 ✭✭✭Matt Holck


    Priest use the stained glass windows to watch their flock.


    Filter rays defused through volumes of dust or smoke or vapor.
    A light of depth hung in a cloud.
    The dyes in window glass panes
    filter colored colonnades
    cut within the window frame.

    Staring at the sun
    shining though cut glass
    priest could see over the land
    wherever beams were cast.

    The priests envy of the forest
    shrouded from their eyes
    for it is hard to trust
    what they can't recognize

    He watched her grow among fields of flax.
    Her hair like fire flowing through rows
    In morning light, she walked to the meadow.
    unaware of the priest’s delight.

    Beneath the trees she started to wander
    leaving his sight for him to ponder
    what he had missed with in the forest.

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    image credit http://streethopmagazine.wordpress.com/2008/04/03/killah-priest-set-to-drop-new-album-behind-the-stained-glass-window/

    The watched do not know the perception to the priests.

    butterflies dance across the sun
    don't look! least you go blind
    flying between sun and eye
    out of reach with every try
    like rainbows running in retreat
    the way your shadow lies.


  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 9,706 ✭✭✭Matt Holck


    An artisan working for the wizards

    I’m the glasscutter.
    With a di(A)mond wheel g_l_i_d_i_n_g in Oil,
    a single stroke /
    stritches a fissure

    I gently Tap beside the line
    deepening the grooVe
    until with a ~twist of the wrists~
    I separate /
    the glass as planned.


  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 9,706 ✭✭✭Matt Holck


    Land's Teeth

    The map describes
    a ridge of mountains that scrapes the clouds of water.
    The clouds remains pass like scattered bones over the pallet of inland desert.

    The ocean laps the bay
    where the humans have built their city
    further inland lay the fields and fiefs
    beyond that the forest
    beyond that the mountains
    beyond that nothing but desert.




    This is a story about Tim: a surf on a barley field.
    "Tim's wrote:
    The sun cuts through the naked dome
    and bakes the earth to stone.
    Keeping my eyes cast on the ground,
    I push the plow tip down.

    Life is like a furrowed field:
    line next to line next to line,
    and I will keep on plowing
    until the end of spring


  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 9,706 ✭✭✭Matt Holck


    Now,
    One might believe Tim bitter
    being trapped in a cast system
    tending a farm for his master
    with no hope for change in position.

    But Tim was a descendent
    of a soldier in the fields,
    and though they'd lost their pendants,
    Tim had fight in him still.

    Still, he could recall the day
    that his family had moved away.
    The failure of his father
    and the cruel pride of his lord.

    Tim wrote:
    My dad, he was a squire
    for the lord of this land.
    He fed and groomed four horses
    with strong and skillful hands.

    My dad, he was a dreamer
    escaping within sleep.
    And when he had a moment,
    he lay down within the keep.

    The lord was hunting goblins
    that festered from the forest.
    When his stead was hobbled,
    and my dad missed his request.

    With no fresh stead to ride upon,
    the goblins got away.
    The only justice dealt by the lord
    was on my dad that day.

    Now, my dad ‘s a farmer
    for his knight he failed
    for dear old dad was sleeping
    among the flaxen fields.

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  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 9,706 ✭✭✭Matt Holck


    As stated earlier,
    Mona is the daughter of a medicine woman living in the meadows near the forest by the river,
    and she like all others is watched by the priest while under the sun.

    Mona's days are filled with gathering herbs for her mother.



    Mona wrote:
    low down on the ground
    the world is so much fuller
    with reeds and beads and crumpled leaves
    holes and tunnels and roots
    labyrinths winding through the grass

    and every plant has magic
    kept secret until discovered
    with my spade I will uncover
    the roots of remedy
    and take them to my mother.


    Mona is coming of age and experiencing ministerial cramps.

    After fetching the water from the well
    She searches the meadow beyond the plowed fields
    To gather the medicines that the wild plants yield

    eyebright seeds are crushed to powder
    bloodroot's pummeled to pulp
    rooted at the river bank
    the aching will not stop

    bent over rolling current in pent under stomach strain
    dropping in the river, her sweat fell like the rain
    and rumbling soft down under, the river began to sing
    The River wrote:
    O mistress I am honored,
    to carry salty kisses away
    but might I suggest that blue cohosh
    would help your burden drain

    travel up into the forest
    to blue buries with webbed leaf
    the root of the blue cohosh
    will bring you some relief

    And listening to the babbling brook,
    Mona's life was changed from then.
    She enter into woodlands
    seldom visited by men.


  • Closed Accounts Posts: 2 likhary


    Across the burned cleared plains,
    new farms sprang.
    An industry to sustain the humans
    as logging was no longer an option. :P
    :)


  • Closed Accounts Posts: 2 likhary


    eyebright seeds are crushed to powder
    bloodroot's pummeled to pulp
    rooted at the river bank
    the aching will not stop


  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 9,706 ✭✭✭Matt Holck


    the fairy Barron dies Mysteriously

    Outside and around them,
    the world keeps on moving.
    An ambassador visits the forest when
    listening to a the babbling brim
    of a rivet tumbling within
    tells of secrets of the goblin games.
    And he sold those secrets to the wizards.

    Now, when this was heard by the fairy Barron,
    he forbid the ambassador to enter the forest.
    But that upset the interest
    of wizards invested
    in the ambassador's visits.

    And than, the Barron died with out reason


  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 9,706 ✭✭✭Matt Holck


    as fallen leafs are gathered


    Goblin Captain
    shackled in irons that burned his wrists
    led on foot in the blinding sun
    "what have I lost? what I have I won?
    have I led them to death for this?"

    Mona
    scarred along the entire side
    scarves to cover her face
    "who would look upon me now
    and not retch over this patch work lace?"

    Tim
    On his own to watch the farm
    though he'd won back his coat of arms
    "what's the point of this honor
    when I am on my own?"

    The Priest
    helpless as he watched from the sky
    to protect the girl from the fire
    "why did I let them get by ....
    ....?"

    Rene
    wringing my hands to pull apart,
    these bones that grind together
    I feel the fall crawl underneath
    as fallen leafs are gathered


  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 9,706 ✭✭✭Matt Holck


    there's a leaflet blowing round the town
    dancing in deserted alleys and gathering in gutters
    to advertise a hanging of a horrible monster whom had lit a girl on fire
    come one! come all! To the stage under the spire
    and see that justice is still practiced

    and the crowd gathered at the gallows at high noon


  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 9,706 ✭✭✭Matt Holck


    I apologize that this story jumps about
    I know what is going to happen
    so I write what comes to mind through out the time line
    ___________________________________________



    Goblin Captain in a cell

    they put me in the dark
    but for me the dark is lit
    they put me in hole
    but a hole is where I dwell
    if only I could gnaw
    my way out of these stone walls


  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 9,706 ✭✭✭Matt Holck


    The gift of a white horse
    Tim wrote:
    an untamed pest
    a wild beast
    this white horse
    a taxing gift

    to watch him nip
    upon the tips
    of crops
    I worked to get

    He can't be stopped
    the fence, he hopped
    he's eaten all the lettuce up

    "I won't be tamed"
    he screams in vain
    like a chick in an abandon nest


  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 9,706 ✭✭✭Matt Holck


    the last line on the last poem
    will be edited to
    "like a chick (left) in an abandon nest"
    as "chick in" sounds like chicken


    this is poem proceding the last

    Tim receives a second horse

    the sun was highest in the sky
    the day my father died
    the crops reach for it on their own
    after the planting I had done
    the nights are short the days are long
    and all I do is run

    when coming before the dawn
    my lord brings another horse to the farm
    and warns
    "caution this is a ornery stallion
    his mother died when he was young
    and no one has yet tame him
    yet, you are brave and strong
    and your father was a gentle man"

    "So take this beast here off my hands
    and say not I'm an unjust man."


  • Posts: 0 [Deleted User]


    Uhm. I feel bad for even interrupting the flow, but this is pretty damned good!


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  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 9,706 ✭✭✭Matt Holck


    Mona Dances at Night

    what does it matter that they can see?
    overlapping maps traced within my skin
    let the harsh wind brush against each crease
    just as it rushes over sea and plains and moutain peaks

    I am the kingdom so let the rain fall
    as the sun turns above
    I turn below

    and in the night, the cratered moon is not alone
    fire fly stars dance way up high
    and race with me out in the night
    and mother sighs and laughs


  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 9,706 ✭✭✭Matt Holck


    The Goblin Captain on his way to the Gallows

    He chewed the leather away
    and bound before the crowd
    spit out the gag and spoke aloud.

    "Our lord exiled the wizard's bard
    because the scribe revealed how we hide.
    The wizards murdered the fairy baron
    because the scribe spied for them."


    For a moment, no one said another word.




    There are other goblins in the City

    So they know how we hide.
    Doesn't mean they found all our holes
    At night, we stealth about the town
    and at day beneath the crown.


    The rope fell stack when the trap to gaped.
    They helped soldierless captain escape.


  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 9,706 ✭✭✭Matt Holck


    The Wizards discard accusations that they murdered the fairy baron.

    Suspicion from the goblins comes from history.
    For fire for glass filled cauldrons, we burned the goblins' trees.
    And I can clearly understand the accusations of the goblin captain
    but I'm forced disagree.

    The fairy baron was our friend.
    He had hammered out the treaty.
    He brought peace between our lands
    by defining territories.
    We morn his passing
    and hope his gift is everlasting.


  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 9,706 ✭✭✭Matt Holck


    The Priest discount the messager
    priest wrote:
    we cannot trust those hiding from sight
    and walk the earth while we sleep at night
    the goblin spoke those words to spite those of us who live in light

    It was no wizard that smote their lord
    just his time for death and no more


  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 9,706 ✭✭✭Matt Holck


    The King's Proclamation

    the goblin escaped death through the trap door
    after accusing the wizards of murder
    'til the king took the stage
    and silenced the rage
    to be sure that his words would be heard

    The KING wrote:
    We will not let this sheet torn from our eyes
    allow our anger to rise.
    Though many are shaking that one was taken
    right from under our eyes.
    I tell you that goblins
    escaped down holes.
    We'll find everyone one of them
    and each of them close
    and bring our proud city
    back into control.

    And I am sure, that some of you heard, the goblins terrible words.
    So I call a court ,to sort this out, and find out what he's talked about.

    I want you know
    that you have the control
    of safety over your homes.
    Take the time
    to find the holes
    where the goblins tunnel below.
    And to your neighbors, say "Hello"
    and let the city guard know
    .


  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 9,706 ✭✭✭Matt Holck


    meanwhile in the forests,
    the goblin that survived the battle returns with his account
    blaming humans of tricking them into fighting at the river bank during the day

    at the fairy court

    problems
    rumble
    goblins'
    death toll

    contrived
    by he
    survived
    to flea

    ambush
    is claimed
    rehashed
    and blamed

    on humans'
    alluring plans


  • Posts: 0 [Deleted User]


    Any more to add to this Matt? I'm really enjoying reading it!


  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 9,706 ✭✭✭Matt Holck


    allright, but bare with me
    I'm going to have cut through the knots that tied the city folk

    there's a hole in cellar of the local tavern
    The bar keep says "No"
    but good citizens know
    and followed the stairs down below.
    they smashed all the barrels
    and did find the hole
    where the goblins tunnel below

    now to a human, a goblin's small
    and through the hole, a solider crawled
    with his lantern lit, and short sword drawn
    he came across stick, barring the way on
    he didn’t stop to think, and broke it with his arm
    and was buried thick, beneath the town tavern


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  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 9,706 ✭✭✭Matt Holck


    an accident of war
    Priest wrote:
    we all knew that Billy Bob Joe
    was a stalwart soldier that defended our land
    and when he heard of the evil down below
    he made damn sure, he was at hand

    he died a hero, he died for a cause
    the make sure, we are safe from our foes
    they buried him below
    for into the hole, he was willing to go

    Still Billy Joe would want us know
    that our safety was worth dying for


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  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 9,706 ✭✭✭Matt Holck


    this is verse about Tim riding his new horse

    And when he would release the reins,
    the stallion strode across the plains.
    As ties whipped freely in the wind,
    the horse was breathing in the stream.

    where that house would if Tim let go and just rode
    round the edge of the forest
    cross the sands of beach coves


  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 9,706 ✭✭✭Matt Holck


    Boom as the horse Walks on Top
    tunnels Knock from the Shock of the Clop

    Soon as the Guards gather Up
    entrance blocked, exits locked, passage lost

    Why should they Stalk Us, our lot?
    we do Not harm their Plot over Us

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    in as Much in their Lust you can Trust







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  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 9,706 ✭✭✭Matt Holck


    fishhead pours solutions to suspend the powdered dyes
    an alchemist's employment for experiments on the side

    throwing Pyrolusite power into stomach acid produced a heavy green gold smoke


  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 9,706 ✭✭✭Matt Holck


    This is a exert from the story


    Mona falls when she spots a goblin


    raw skin screamed with every scrape
    of branches crossing her escape

    she bit a root to dull the pain
    when within the crashing stream
    she saw a goblin slide past Tim

    distracted she misstepped
    her ankle turned atop a rock
    Off balance, her knees folded
    and on the broken path, she dropped


  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 9,706 ✭✭✭Matt Holck


    I put an old poem from the first book to song


    Beast of Burden
    The sun cuts through the naked dome and bakes the earth to stone.
    Keeping eyes cast on the ground, I push the plow tip down.
    Life is like a furrowed field: line next to line next to line,
    and I will keep on plo-ow-owing 'til the end of time

    all powers, all the glories we won't soon forget
    to the furrows to the reaper, we are not dead yet
    with your love dear, with your love, perhaps I should not dwell
    with your love dear, with your love, pretend I'm not hell

    {Chorus]
    look out to the open sky
    watch the clouds flow languidly by
    in the wind, they tumble and play
    past your lot each day

    that horse there grazing could do work raising
    moist soil from earth's soft breast
    She'll pull the plow blade by rope tie I made
    I'll finally have some rest.

    {Chorus]
    look out to the open sky
    watch the clouds flow languidly by
    in the wind, they tumble and play
    past your lot each day
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  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 9,706 ✭✭✭Matt Holck


    through the stain glass lens

    Mono looked through the stain glass lens
    while the sun beat down noon shadows
    and the day turned to night
    the azure sea across the sky vanished
    stars exposed at noon quivered through the lens
    as Mono slowly turned the glass up toward the sun
    saw a cauldron of fire raging whirling into pools
    she winced and looked away


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  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 9,706 ✭✭✭Matt Holck


    Goblin Captain (oddly still nameless)
    rallies underground goblins that rescued him to topple the king's authority

    the new rule to block holes
    the king has gotten far too bold
    and now he must be shown
    that he is nothing

    so we'll dig below
    and we'll rise above
    and bring his castle down




    I'm not going to try and explain everything
    that would be for a book I hold onto for sale


  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 9,706 ✭✭✭Matt Holck


    the mare to the stallion

    neigh, rift or slight cannot sever the silence
    and the call across the canyon echoes in the open
    if you really, I am here unwavering


  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 9,706 ✭✭✭Matt Holck


    some updating about city and the goblins who live under the city


    the shreek in the city pity bare feet underneath
    the swing of machetes pinning each entrance
    to entrenched tunnels too small for human adults
    would you send a child down those wild twisty tangles?
    routes of ancient forest passages to what remains
    cut the circulation before the poison becomes inflamed


    the above statement is about
    the goblin tunnels below the city being too small for adults to fit through

    and how there is suspicion that these goblin tunnels run all the way o the forest some 30 miles away

    you can't be found when under ground
    when out at night while up in town
    where dark is light and light will blind
    the surface world is left behind

    we soon boil in paths airtight
    wind to coils as asps will strike
    in waiting for the dark night
    to kill the king that calls for fight


    here the goblins grumble about being hunted and having to hide

    take care beware the darkened hours
    cower in your hut tonight
    or join the fight to smite the blight
    that rises from the sewer

    walk in pairs or more
    always be well armed
    if you come upon a goblin,
    hobble him before he runs

    we march in hob nail boots
    pound order underfoot
    sound fear rattling to the root
    of every goblin's thought


    here, the city folk live in fear knowing goblins could be hiding anywhere
    the take to streets in patrols at night

    lay low friend, don't offend, the city recently soar
    let need find, proper time, for opportunity once more
    you're wild and hasty
    wasted your own nest
    I want to be honest
    I can't get behind this
    desperation for justice
    when messing with our ****
    we live here! get it!


    this is the goblin leader of the under city
    telling a rescued captain to cool off about revenge
    because the city is all ready in an uproar due to the goblins rescue


  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 9,706 ✭✭✭Matt Holck


    when the fairy barron was murdered early in book 1

    the woods became suspicious

    Whispers in the woods

    spongy moss repels imprints
    broken leaves collapse together
    exposed roots shirk weight



    lizard told me
    sunlight warms the blood
    close contact encompasses cover
    dragonflies taste good
    smell is the taste of air
    on the snake's forked tongue

    GOBLIN CAPTAIN:
    why are we idle in wonder
    agape at death's thunder
    numb under open sky

    everyone knows wizards exposed
    goblins on farmland
    this murder's their plan
    they take what they can


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