Hunter456 wrote: » started to apply for job bridge internships for getting my self back into the work force might be the best option. at the end of the day its something to add to the c.v
Hunter456 wrote: » yes i'm clamming social welfare at the moment.
Hunter456 wrote: » I specailize in I.T and have 8 years experience. My Cv looks fine to me the right grammer used.....
Hunter456 wrote: » im not a 16 year old and i never said i knew it all im very skilled with technology and computers but its always a learning curve.
challengemaster wrote: » I know it was a mod instruction to lay off on the spell czech/grammar nazism, but since the CV was posted I think it's relevant again. There's a huge amount of things wrong with your CV, and I'm just talking about the spelling/grammar. There's random capitalization going on everywhere. Repetition of words rather than correct punctuation "involves building and repairing and Upgrading of Computers". Wrong words used: "We also learned to both clean, install and upgrade " - Both means two. Random inclusion/exclusion of naming "Windows XP, Vista and Windows 7 ", why not Windows Vista? Is it less worthy of its title? And just bad grammar: "I have learned how to rebuild and reconstructed PC’s" As problematic as that may be, your real issue is your lack of education and experience. You're in your mid-late 20's and you still have your Junior Cert on your CV, and consider it a major achievement. That's a major problem. You also can't count. You said you had 8 years of experience. 2006-2009 is not 8 years. Aside from that, there's no clear dates of employment. You've just written the year. You should have a start and end date for each one. For all anyone looking at that CV knows, you could have only held each position for 1 week. In fact your only relevant work experience may be less than that. The achievement section is pointless, because you aren't highlighting any actual achievements that make you look good or stand out. This should be where you point out awards or things of note - not just what subjects you studied for the junior cert. Have you any FETAC distinctions? This should be where you point them out. If that's already what you've done, it's really not obvious - because the word DISTINCTION is nowhere to be found. Your Hobbies and Interests section looks childish, as in it appears a child wrote it. "and playing video games when I get the chance. I am also big into computers and often fix them for family and friends." Also formatting wise, for a CV that actually has so little content on it, it takes up a huge amount of space. My academic CV which has huge amounts of information on it (Qualifications, research experience, 2 dissertations and abstracts on each, listed skills, certifications, publications, other relevant experience and references) fits into 2 pages. Outside of all that, it's very obvious for the last 5 years you have done nothing to upskill. This may seem like very harsh criticism, but it's the exact thing any employer reading it will think.
Hunter456 wrote: » i don't class the junior cert a massive achievement i put it there as i thought a potential employer would like to know my past and present education . your comments seem to be a little snobby to be honest.
Hunter456 wrote: » your comments seem to be a little snobby to be honest.
stanley1980 wrote: » It's not easy to get a job but you're not giving yourself the best chance either on this evidence. Then again, it's a lot easier to ignore the facts and blame everyone else isn't it.
edanto wrote: » Hunter456, I've taken on a good few interns over the years into IT positions, and some of them had similar experience to yourself at the start. But, if you interview in the same way that you are posting on this thread, there's no way I would offer you a position. For example, stanley1980 spends a good 10/20 minutes going through your CV, gives loads of examples about how to improve it, offers more help if needed, and apologises if they are being a bit 'preachy' but anyone can see that they are really going out of their way to help a stranger on the internet. And you slap them in the face with 'some of your comments are a bit snobby'. Game over. Your problem is your attitude. End of story. People that are hiring other people to work in IT need to know that the person doesn't make mistakes. One common way of checking that is to check their spelling, grammar. You were told that right at the start of the thread and still your CV had mistakes in it. The people that get hired are serious about learning and personal development. When someone gives them criticism they genuinely try and learn from it and change their behaviour. They thank people that give feedback. (I don't think you've thanked a single post) They put in the effort to present a professional face, and make sure that the quality of their communications during the interview process gives the recruiter confidence that their work will be of a high standard. They also follow through on their commitments and deliver tasks on time. You were going to watch that video about the A+ this morning. Honestly, did you? It's easy to lie, but what's the point. Just tell us if you did or not.
protelos wrote: » Sent on something there. best of luck in your hunt. Some good advice on this tread, not just for you!
Hunter456 wrote: » I didn't mean to come across as a smart arse but was having a bad day I don't want to fall back into a rut with depression looking for work so I'm looking to get back into training with internships and guy on here which I'm so thankfull for he rearranged my Cv and my God its looks professional and its much better and i thank ye for the help and the boot in the arse to get myself back into upskilling myself for future applications for jobs
Slutmonkey57b wrote: » I think this is a harsh truth you need to accept if you really want to get a job "in IT": You are not "very skilled". Very skilled people went to college, and completed a bachelor's degree. They then spent several years in corporate IT, doing practical, real world development or engineering. They've got specialist certifications on top of their degree which are relevant to the work they've been doing, or an employer might require them to do. "IT" jobs routinely have requirements for, at the very least, a university degree and several years of high quality *recent* experience in specialised, technical disciplines, I.e. C++, ruby on rails, java, hadoop, Oracle, SharePoint, with a requirement for certification in whatever discipline it might be. Once you accept that, you then need to work on your skills. It will be several years of hard work to get certs, degrees etc for the job you think you deserve. And you will need to learn one thing above all else: to succeed in IT, you need to be motivated, hard-working, and capable. You also, most importantly, need to be able to work to a deadline, and be time-aware. IT projects generally run along the lines of "Hi, we need this done last Tuesday, and the specs we're going to give you are wrong, and we'll change half of it just before you deliver it. Come back to me in a month with everything done and then I'll explain why I assumed you were doing something else." The people interviewing you will be engineers and developers. When they see a 5 year hole in your CV, they won't think "There's someone who was doing something else for 5 years", they'll think "There's 5 years wasted where that person could have been getting a masters. And working. And raising a baby." All the certs in the world won't help you if you walk into an office with the attitude of "sure I'm going to sit here until someone hands me something".
Christine LaDuchesse wrote: » Hi OP, I have to agree with most of the comments here, but would like to add a possibility for you. If you were willing to train your language skills, you will have a bilingual job in no time at any helpdesk of any of the big USA companies having their EMEA headquarters in Ireland. Those employers are always looking for people skilled with languages. There are many EMEA headquarters of IT companies in Ireland, think INtel, IBM, HP, etc, etc. You would get employment via the recruiters for these companies, like CPL, and though not ideal, it is a start, from where you can work your way up. Maybe something to consider?
Hunter456 wrote: » so giving the sample of a new C.V i put them to use and came with a new looking and was hoping if some could review it. credit to stheno and protelos